First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, I'm Andy in Chinese mainland, I want to know well English and recognize some new foreign friends. At the same time I want to grasp some opportunity in my real life. Thanks for your focus and support.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, I'm Andy from mainland China. I want to know well become very familiar with English and meet some new foreign friends. At the same time, I want to grasp some opportunities in my real life. Thanks for your attention and support.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello! I'm Andy from mainland China. I want to learn English well and get to know some new foreign friends. I also want to take some opportunities that come into my life. Thanks for your focus and support.
*Using both "at the same time" and "also" in one sentence here is a case of redundancy. So just choose one between the two.
**"Focus" is a bit off. Consider using a different word.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, I'm AndySome expression errors, but not bad nonetheless. Continue to practice!
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