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The famous person I would have dinner with If I had a chance, I would have dinner with a Korean drummer Kang Min Hyuk. May I use 'will' instead of 'would'? Thank you for you permission. Hi is a member of a South Korean indie band CNBlue since 2009, the year they started to play music as a band. Min Hyuk is a very serious and clever young man with a stunning smile which causes fainting of school girls. I suppose I am not worse than army of fan girls, so I decided I need to talk to him in private atmosphere of his father's restaurant, the place where you can taste delicious Korean cuisine and make friends with my future father-in-law. It seems like a good idea, doesn't it? After we will go there and have a couple of glasses of dry red wine I am going to ask him only if he would marry me. I am sure no one could ask him such a provocative question before, so he will definitely answer me yes. Wish us luck guys!

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The celebrity I would like to have dinner with

If I had the chance, I would have dinner with Korean drummer, Kang Min Hyuk. May I use 'will' here instead of 'would'? (No, 'will' is wrong.) (Thank you for your answer/permission?).

Mr Hyuk has been a member of South Korean indie band CNBlue since 2009, the year they began. Min Hyuk is a very serious and clever young man with a stunning smile which causes school girls to faint. I suppose I am no worse than the army of girl fans, so I decide I need to talk to him in the privacy of his father's restaurant; a place where I can taste delicious Korean cuisine and make friends with my future father-in-law. It seems like a good idea, doesn't it? (Yes). After we will go there and have a couple of glasses of dry red wine I am going to ask him only if he would marry me. I am sure that no one has asked him such a provocative question before, so he will definitely say yes. Wish us luck guys! (Good luck!)

Very well written!

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