My hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place.It stands beside the Changjiang river which is the longest river in China.
My hometown is rich in fish and rice.
In the old days ,my hometown is very poor,most of young people have to go out for work.
Recently,several factiories have been set up.Young people come back and work at home.
I love my hometown,i hope it 's getting better and better.
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My hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place.It stands beside the Yangtze river which is the longest river in China. It is also is rich in fish and rice.In the old days ,My hometown is used to be very poor, hence most of the younger people have left to go out for and find work. Recently, several factiories have been set up in the area so many of these young people have come back and to work here insteadat home.
I love my hometown, I hope it 's getting better and better life here continues to improve.
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My home town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside the Changjiang river which is the longest river in China. It is rich in fish and rice.In the old days my hometown was very poor, and most of the young had to leave to find work.
Recently, several factories have been set up. The young have come back and now work at home.
I love my hometown. I hope it 's getting better and better.
Very well written!
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