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Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing a photo?
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The photo shows that there a man and a bear faces each other in a beautiful field. There is a small stream there. The man is taking photograph of the bear. The bear is coming close to the man. It looks little dengue. The bear is bigger than him. I think that he is one of pro cameraman. He is taking risk for a best shot.
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Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing a photo?
The photo shows that there a(3) man and a (3)bear facing each other in a (3) beautiful field. There is a (3)small stream (1) there. The (3a) man is taking a (3)photograph of the (3a) bear. The (3a)bear is coming close approaching to the (3a) man. It looks dangerous little dengue. The (3a) bear is bigger than him. I think that he is one of pro a professional cameraman. He is taking a (2) risk for the (2) best shot.Hi Hiro,
Very nicely written! Just a few suggestions for you:
(1) The word "there" is unnecessary as you started the sentence with "There is". Therefore, the reader should know that a small stream is found in the photo.
(2) We use "a" to refer to general noun. The cameraman is subjecting himself to a general and unknown risk (eg the bear may chase him, the bear may maul him or the bear may sit on him etc.) We use "the" to refer to a specific noun. The cameraman is taking a very specific shot of the bear. Hence, he is taking "the" best shot.
(3) When we introduce something or someone for the first time in a text, we use "a". Thereafter, we can use "the" (3a).
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Lance
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Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you describe a photo?[ Picture fourteen]
The photo shows a man and a bear face to face in a beautiful field. There is a small stream. The man photographs the bear. The bear comes close. It looks a little crazy. The bear is bigger than him. I think that he is a pro photographer. He is taking a big risk for the best shot.
Very well written!
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Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing a photo?[ Picture fourteen]
The photo shows that there is a man and a bear facing each other in a beautiful field. There is a small stream there. The man is taking a photograph of the bear. The bear is coming close to the man. It looks a little dangerous. The bear is bigger than him. I think that he is a pro cameraman. He is taking a risk to get the best shot.
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