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The art class Hi teacher ! I really love art and I can’t lost this opportunity, because I really enjoy this subject and when I had chance to read the book about history of art, was amazing and since this situation I wait one class with this subject. So is one of my passion because this subject is very interesting to me and I can learn many different things, like history about the civilizations and other people culture, further I have this experience to look thing like architecture different because when a se anything about architecture my mind bring to me all history and art related and this is an amazing experience . I want to start in this course in this week, can you help me please. I expect I can show you how amazing is this opportunity to me .

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The Art Class

Hi teacher! I really love art and I can’t lose/miss this opportunity, because I really enjoy this/the subject. When I had the chance to read the book about the history of art, I found it was amazing. Since this situation then I've waited for a one class with about this subject. It is one of my passions,  because/since this subject is very interesting to me. I can (or: It gives me the change to) learn (about) many different things, like the history of the civilizations and other people's cultures. Further, I have this experience to way of looking at things like architecture differently. When I see something about related to architecture, my mind bring to me all history and art related and this is an amazing experience .* I want/would like  to start in this/the course in this week. Can you help me please./Can you please help me.
I expect that I will be able to I can show you how amazing is this opportunity is to me .

* This sentence doesn't really work. I would probably rewrite it as follows:"When I look at architecture, it makes me think about the history and art aspects related to it, which is an amazing experience".


Good job Marcos. It is best not to make your sentences too long. :)

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