My live
I grew up in Brazil, and i have never been to another country, my dream is to go to Canada, first because it is beautiful, second because it is so cold and i will finally have snow. I keep imagining what snow is like ? so soft . Here I don' have snow just the strong sun have beach but snow is different more beautiful.
I want to visit the Banff, CN tower, awesome ski places. I grew up more just nineteen years old I can't travel alone.
One I will day go!
I hope....
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My life
I grew up in Brazil, and I have never been to another country. My dream is to go to Canada. First because it is beautiful, second because it is so cold and I will finally have snow. I keep imagining what snow is like? so soft . Here I don't have snow, just the hard sun and the beach, but snow is different and more beautiful.I want to visit the Banff, CN tower, and awesome ski places. I grew up more, I am just nineteen years old, so I can't travel alone.
One I will day go!
I hope....
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Hey Karen !! I love Canada ......
Thanks for you redress !!
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I would change the words "hard sun" to "strong sun".
Yes, you would love Canada. A very nice country to visit but cold in winter. Bring a warm jacket!!!!!
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