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I think we should take cell phones before class start. I think we should take cell phones before class start and give it back after day class finish every day. Because students have to focus on their schoolwork. If students have cell phones, they might can’t focus on the class. Next, if students don’t have cell phone, they have many time to communicate with their friends. So they can make an opportunity to talk to their friends. Last, cell phone is not good for our health. Cell phone cause many health problems. So I think it is right to take cell phones before class start.

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I think students should turn in their cell phones to the teacher before class starts and get them back at the end of day after class is finished.
I think this is important because students need to focus on their schoolwork.
If students have cell phones, they might not be able focus on the class.
Also, if students don’t have cell phones, they will have more time to communicate with their friends. This will provide an opportunity for students to talk with their friends.
Last, cell phones are not good for our health. Cell phones cause many health problems.
So, I think it is right to take cell phones before class starts.
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I think we should hand in our cell phones before the class starts. I think we should take hand in our cell phones before the class starts and get it back after day class finishes every day because students have to focus on their schoolwork. If students have cell phones, they might can’t not focus in the class. Next, if students don’t have cell phones, they have a lot of time to communicate with their friends. So, they can create an opportunity to talk to their friends. Lastly, cell phones are not good for our health. Cell phones cause many health problems. So I think it is right to hand in cell phones before the class starts. Hand in = pass something to a responsible person Well done Jung Je! A good try.

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