Introduction
This is my first time publishing an English article in italki and I even don't know what I am going to talk about.So, I am going to introduce myself.I am a Chinese girl who want to improve my English skill and learn more about france. I am active,handsome,always smile.And I like doing sports,love taste delicious (ok,I love eating!),and dream to travel around the world!I try my best to be the best of me and I believe I will become better!(23333333)
I am looking forward to make friend with all of you!Can we?
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Introduction
This is my first time [publishing]/to write an English article in italki, and I even don't know (even) what I am going to talk about. So, I am going to introduce myself.I am a Chinese girl who wants to improve my her English skill, and learn more about France. I am active, [handsome]*/good-looking/attractive, and always smiling. And I like doing sports, love [taste]/to eat well/to eat delicious food (ok,I love eating!), and dream of travelling/[to travel] around the world! I try my best to be the best of me and I believe that I will [become]/get better!(23333333)I am looking forward to making friends with all of you! Can we?
* 'handsome' applies to men and boys, and when used for a woman it implies a well-constructed, pleasing appearance rather than beauty ; however, it is considered appropriate to be modest about your beauty - even if you know you 'turn heads' ! It's only on dating sites that women describe themselves as attractive.
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Introduction
This is my first time publishing an English article in italki and I even don't know what I am going to talk about. So, I am going to introduce myself. I am a Chinese girl who want to improve my English skill and learn more about France. I am active, handsome (wut?), always smile. And I like playing sports, love tasting delicious food (ok,I love eating!), and dream to travel around the world! I try my best to be the best of me and I believe I will become better!(23333333)I am looking forward to make friend with all of you! Can we?
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This is a small correction of spelling and grammar from me. Your English is decent might i say. Just notice more about spelling, to perfect your writing.
Btw, i'm very interested in Chinese. Could we be friend and you teach me some basic Chinese to communicate ?
Regards
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哦哦谢谢提醒啊下次注意啦
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你贴错区了。。使用语言选英语，不是中文。还有你可以注意一下标点，后面应该有一个空格，很多地方漏了。
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