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Venezuela
Venezuela, my country, is in South America. It is a tropical country whit with two seasons a year: summer and winter. Just now, it is winter, and it rains a lot in my city San Cristóbal. Generally, when its it rains, the city es is green, the trees grow up and many bird are seen eating wild fruits. San Cristobal is surrounded by mountains. It's a beautiful city.Notes:
English sentences need a subject. If there is no subject (I, you, the tree, my city etc.), then use "it".
It's = it is, its = possessive form of it,
For example: It's a lovely day today = It is a lovely day today
Its nose was wet = The dog's nose was wet.
Venezuela
Venezuela, my country, is in South America. It is a tropical country, so it has only 2Just now, is winter and it rains a lot in my city San Cristóbal. > It was the wet season here not too long ago, so it was raining a lot in the city of San Cristobal, where I live. > "Just now" is not a time scale that we use for weather change : it too short, like a few minutes ago .
Generally. When its rain, the city es green, the treesgrow up and many bird are seen eating wild fruits. San Cristobal is surrounded by mountains. It's a beautiful city.
> Whenever it rains a lot, the city looks green as plants start to grow, and the trees start to bear fruits. Many birds can then be seen eating these fruits.> Wild fruits belongs in the wild, not in a city.
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