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Essay (frienship) Please, help me! Correct it !:) (Does life-long friendship exist only in books and films?) Every person wants to have a close friend, who could support in a difficult situation and give a piece of advice if it is necessary. The world seems to be absolutely different, if you have such a person next to you. I am strongly convinced that life-long frienship exists. For a start, films and books are created by people, who firstly must rely on their own experience and feelings. Otherwise they could not make a really plausible and good work. All in all, why does not life-long friendship may exist? It always depends on 2 people and if they both do want to be friends - nothing can break it. I have examples in life. For instanse, my grandfather and his friend from school. They still meet up and communicate. Moreover, our 2 families get on well with each other too. Many people believe that it is impossible to be friends for a long time. I guess, there are a lot of reasons for this. Some think that people may be too selfish and frivolous for it. Other afraid of being betrayed. The rest may actually be a lonely and self-confident type, who do not need any friendship at all. However, there are enough little amount of them. Nevertheless I believe in a friendship till extreme old age. All people are absolutely different and everyone can find a person after his own heart. Otherwise people become absolutely alone in the decline of life, because there are some people who could not start a family in their life. In conclusion I would say that everyone must be more trusting, opener and kinder for others. It allows find close friends, which make life more brightly.

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Essay (friendship

Please, help me! Correct it !:)

(Does life-long friendship exist only in books and films?)

    Every person wants to have a close friend, someone who could support them during a difficult situation and give advice, if is necessary. The world seems to be totally different, if you have such a person by your side. I am strongly convinced that life-long frienship exists.

    For a start, films and books are created by people, who rely on their own experiences and feelings. Otherwise, they could not make a very plausible piece.  All in all, why wouldn't  life-long friendship exist? It always depends on two people and if they  want to be friends - if so, nothing can break it. I have seen many examples of this in life. For instance, my grandfather and his friend from school. They still meet up and communicate. Moreover, our  families get on well with each other too.

    Many people believe that it is impossible to be friends for a long time. I guess there are a lot of reasons for this. Some think that people may be too selfish and frivolous for it. Others are afraid of being betrayed. The rest may actually be a lonely and self-confident type, who do not need any friendship at all. However, there are only a few of these people in the world. 
    Nevertheless I believe in a friendship until extreme old age. All people are different, but everyone can find a person after their own heart. Otherwise people become alone in the decline of life, because not everyone can have a family in their life.

In conclusion I would say that everyone must be more trusting, open and kinder for others. It allows youth  find close friends, which make life brighter.

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Essay (friendship)

Please, help me! Correct it !:)

(Does Do life-long friendships exist only in books and films?)

Every person wants to have a close friend, who could provide support in a difficult situation and give a piece of advice if it is necessary. The world seems to be completely different, if you have such a person next to you. I am strongly convinced that life-long friendships exists.

For a start starters, films and books are created by people, who firstly must rely on their own experiences and feelings. Otherwise they could not make a really plausible and good piece of work. All in all, why does not don't life-long friendships may exist? It always depends on 2/two people and if they both do want/wish to be friends - nothing can break it. I have examples/experiences in from my life. For instance, my grandfather and his friend from school still meet up and communicate. Moreover, our 2/two families also get on along well with each other too as well.

Many people believe that it is impossible to be friends for a long time. I guess, there are a lot of reasons for this. Some think that people may be too selfish and frivolous for it. Others are afraid of being betrayed. The rest may actually be a the lonely and self-confident type, who do not need any friendship at all. However, there are enough little amount very few of them.

Nevertheless, I believe in a having friendship till/until extreme old age. All people are absolutely/completely different and everyone can find a person after his similar to their own heart. Otherwise people become absolutely alone in the decline of their life, because there are some people who could not start a family in their life.

In conclusion I would say that everyone must be more trusting, open and kind/caring for others. It allows us to find close friends, which makes life more bright/beautiful.
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Essay (friendship)

Please, help me! Correct it !:)

(Does life-long friendship exist only in books and films?)

Every person wants to have a close friend, who could provide support in a difficult situation and give a piece of advice if it is necessary. The world seems to be absolutely different, if you have such a person next to beside you. I am strongly convinced that life-long friendship exists.

For a start, films and books are created by people, who firstly must rely on their own experience and feelings. Otherwise they could not make a really plausible and good worthwhile work. All in all, why does not might life-long friendship may not exist? It always depends on 2 two people, and if they both do want to be friends – nothing can break it. I have examples in life, for instanse instance, my grandfather and his friend from school. They still meet up and communicate. Moreover, our 2 two families get on well with each other, too.

Many people believe that it is impossible to be friends for a long time. I guess, there are a lot of reasons for this. Some think that people may be too selfish and frivolous for it. Others afraid of fear being betrayed. The rest may actually be a lonely and but self-confident type, who do not needing any friendship at all. However, there are enough little amount sufficiently few of them.

Nevertheless, I believe in a friendship till extreme old age. All people are absolutely different and everyone can find a person after his or her own heart. Otherwise, people become absolutely alone in the decline of life their declining years, because there are some people who could not start a family in their life.

In conclusion, I would say that everyone must be more trusting, opener open and kinder kind for others. It allows find close friendships, which make life more brightly brighter.
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I agree with you. and I had an expression like that I have a friend he is from Palestine's I considered him as a close friend maybe more it's like a brother to me we trust each other and this is what made our relationship better. friendship it's the most beautiful things in this world

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