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Are these sentences correct? (Part1) 喝牛奶可以帮助你长高。 在看了不同中国的节目我注意到很多有名牛奶的广告。 他们的目标不是父母买牛奶,但是成人买牛奶。 我想知道为什么,所以我问我的朋友。我问她,因为在我的国家牛奶广告的目标是父母的。很多成人不在喝牛奶。她(我的朋友)说;有可能他们想喝牛奶可以帮助他们长高。这是真的吗?你觉得喝牛奶可以帮助你长高吗? 小的时候我喝了很多牛奶。中学生的时候每天早我喝了牛奶。现在我是1。58。不是高。而且我喝了很多牛奶。 我认为这是因为我的基因。我的父母还有姐姐不是很高的人。我觉得喝牛奶非常重要,喝牛奶会你的骨骼更强大还有帮助你的成长。 但是在成人喝牛奶不帮助你长高。 -------------------------------------------- While watching different Chinese shows I noticed a lot of advertisements for a Chinese famous milk brand. This advertisement wasnt for parents to buy milk for their childeren, but for adults to buy milk. I was wondering why this was and asked my friend. I asked her, because in my country we have also milk advertisement but targeted to parents. A lot of adults dont drink milk anymore. She said maybe people believe that drinking milk can make you grow tall. Is this true? Is it true that milk can help you grow tall? When I was little I drank a lot of milk. When I was in highschool, everyday before going to school I drank milk. I'm 1.58, not tall at all. But I drank a lot of milk. I think that it's because of genes. My parents and sisters aren't tall people. I think drinking milk is very important, it will make your bones strong and will help with your growth. But drinking it now, as an adult will not help you grow tall.

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Are these sentences correct? (Part1)

喝牛奶可以帮助你长高。

在看不同中国的节目时,我注意到很多名牌牛奶的广告。
这些广告不是让父母买牛奶,而是让成人买牛奶。

我想知道为什么,所以我问我的朋友。我问她,因为在我的国家牛奶广告的目标是针对父母。很多成人不再喝牛奶。她(我的朋友)说;有可能他们认为喝牛奶可以帮助他们长高。这是真的吗?你觉得喝牛奶可以帮助你长高吗?

小的时候我喝了很多牛奶。我上中学的时候,每天上学前我会喝牛奶。现在我是1.58, 不是很高,尽管我喝了很多牛奶。
我认为这是因为我的基因。我的父母还有姐姐不是很高的人。我觉得喝牛奶非常重要,喝牛奶会使你的骨骼更强大,帮助你成长。 但是对成人来说,喝牛奶不会帮助长高。

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While watching different Chinese shows I noticed a lot of advertisements for a Chinese famous milk brand. This advertisement was not for parents to buy milk for their children, but for adults to buy milk.

I was wondering why this was and asked my friend. I asked her, because in my country we have also milk advertisement but targeted to parents. A lot of adults don't drink milk anymore. She said maybe people believe that drinking milk can make you grow tall. Is this true? Is it true that milk can help you grow tall?

When I was little I drank a lot of milk. When I was in high school, everyday before going to school I drank milk. I'm 1.58, not tall at all. But I drank a lot of milk.

I think that it's because of genes. My parents and sisters aren't tall people. I think drinking milk is very important, it will make your bones strong and will help with your growth. But drinking it now, as an adult will not help you grow tall.
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Are these sentences correct? (Part1)

喝牛奶可以帮助你长高。

喝牛奶有助於長高。

在看了不同中国的节目我注意到很多有名牛奶的广告。
他们的目标不是父母买牛奶,但是成人买牛奶。

當我收看一些中國節目時,我同時也看到了許多知名牛奶品牌的廣告。

他們的廣告對象並非吸引父母親為孩子買牛奶,而是主打給成人喝的牛奶


我想知道为什么,所以我问我的朋友。我问她,因为在我的国家牛奶广告的目标是父母的。很多成人不在喝牛奶。她(我的朋友)说;有可能他们想喝牛奶可以帮助他们长高。这是真的吗?你觉得喝牛奶可以帮助你长高吗?

我想知道這是怎麼一回事,於是向一位朋友請教。為了表示我的疑問,我向她說起家鄉的情況: 在我的國家多數人長大成人後便不再喝牛奶,所以廣告的對象都是針對在養育孩子的父母親。朋友說: 可能有人相信喝牛奶有助於再長高。這是真的嗎? 大家覺得喝牛奶真的能幫我們增加身高?


小的时候我喝了很多牛奶。中学生的时候每天早我喝了牛奶。现在我是1。58。不是高。而且我喝了很多牛奶。
我认为这是因为我的基因。我的父母还有姐姐不是很高的人。我觉得喝牛奶非常重要,喝牛奶会你的骨骼更强大还有帮助你的成长。 但是在成人喝牛奶不帮助你长高。


小時候我的確喝了不少牛奶,上中學時我還每天都喝,即使如此,但是我目前身高158公分其實並不高。
我認為身高是受基因影響,像我父母親和姐姐身高都不是很高。當然,我同意對於成長階段的孩童,牛奶是非常重要的營養來源,例如它能夠強化骨骼,但是否會影響身高,就我本身的年少成長經驗,我還是持保留態度,更何況是已經停止發育的成人,我更不可能相信喝牛奶還會增加身高。

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成人喝牛奶是为了补钙。欧美国家的成人都只喝咖啡不喝牛奶吗?不需要补钙?

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