From now on,run everday
Now i am a stay-at-home mom,my baby is over one year old.
I feel tired and often feels uncomfortable in my stomack.
Yesterday,Doctor told me i'v got a depression.
In addition to taking medicine,i need runing.
Althought it's difficult to get up for me ,but i steel decide to get up at 6:00.
Today is the first day,I made it.
Come on !
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From now on, I will run everyday
Now, I am a stay-at-home mom. My baby is over one year old.I feel tired and often feel uncomfortable in my stomach.
Yesterday, my doctor told me that I am depressed.
In addition to taking medicine, I need to start running.
Although it's difficult for me to get up for me , I still decided to get up at 6:00.
Today is the first day and I made it.
Come on!
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From now on,run everday
From now on, I will run daily
Now, I am a stay-home mom, and my baby is over one year old.I feel tired and often feel uncomfortable in my stomach.
Yesterday, the doctor told me I've got a depression. ("depression" is an uncountable noun, so we cannot use "a" to describe it.)
In addition to taking medicine, I need to run regularly.
Although it's difficult for me to get up, but I still steel decided to get up at six in the morning. ("Although" is already a connector of contrast, therefore, it is not necessary to use "but".)
Today is the first day, and I made it.
Come on !
Hi Rita,
I'm sorry to hear about your condition. I had a bout of depression when I was much younger, and regular exercise does help to boost your feel-good hormones.
Keep it up!
Lance
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