I wish you knew that I can`t say whether 5 years it is long or short time. So many things have happened. My life has completely changed. Nevertheless, it means nothing, because I am still your daughte

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Angela

I wish you knew that I can`t say whether 5 years it is long or short time. So many things have happened. My life has completely changed. Nevertheless, it means nothing, because I am still your daughter. If I could talk to you I would tell you that you were a twice grandma. I wish I saw you smiling when you looked at this little boy. If I only could see you again! I wish you were here. I wish I didn`t have to look only at your portrait which always keeping silence. Frankly speaking, I like this snapshot. You`re so beautiful on the photo. Your enormous eyes and thin smile make me remember what I used to have a mother. I remember our walks in the evenings and endless talks with a cup of tea. I miss you, darling.

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I wish you knew that...

I can't say whether 5 years it is long or a short time. So many things have happened. My life has completely changed. Nevertheless, it means nothing, because I am still your daughter. If I could talk to you, I would tell you that you were a twice grandma. I wish I saw you smiling when you looked at this little boy. If I only could see you again! I wish you were here. I wish I didn't have to look only at your portrait, which is always keeping silent. Frankly speaking, I like this snapshot. You're so beautiful on the photo. Your enormous eyes and thin smile make me remember what when I used to have a mother. I remember our walks in the evenings and endless talks with a cup of tea. I miss you, darling.

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I wish you knew that

I can`t say whether 5 years is a long or a short time. So many things have happened. My life has completely changed. Nevertheless, it means nothing, because I am still your daughter.

If I could talk to you, I would tell you that you were twice a grandma. I wish I could see you smiling when you looked at the little boy. If only I could see you again! I wish you were here.

I wish I didn`t have just your portrait to look at: a portrait that remains silent. Frankly speaking, I like this snapshot. You`re so beautiful in the photo. Your enormous eyes and thin smile remind me that I used to have a mother. I remember our walks in the evenings, and endless talks over a cups of tea. I miss you, darling.

I wish you knew that

I can`t say whether 5 years it is a long or a short time. So many things have happened. My life has completely changed. Nevertheless, it means nothing, because I am still your daughter. If I could talk to you, I would tell you twice that you were are a twice grandma. I wish I could see saw you smiling when you looked at this little boy. If I could only could OR if only I could see you again! I wish you were here. I wish I didn`t [have to look only at]/only have your portrait ( to look at ) which always holds/keepsing its silence OR which is always silent. Frankly (speaking), I like this snapshot. You`re so beautiful on in the photo. Your enormous eyes and thin faint/gentle smile make me remember what that I used to have a mother. I remember our walks in the evenings, and endless talks with a cup of tea. I miss you, darling.

beautifully written, and touching

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