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Hi! Can you correct me, please?
I'm writing a presentation for next Tuesday and I want to start like this:
Good morning, my name is Mercedes although you can call me Merce for short because many people call me Merce as well. At present, I study History and Arts to get a position as a civil servant in a high school.
Today, the topic that I have been given is... I'm not an expert in this topic, but I would like to start by saying that, from my point of view, is of paramount importance that we take this topic into account for many different reasons.
Thank you for your help in advance!
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Good morning, my name is Mercedes although but you can most people call me Merce for short. because many people call me Merce as well. At present the moment, I'm studying History and Arts in order to get a position job as a civil servant in a high school.
Today, the topic that I have been given My topic today is... Now, I'm not an expert in ___, but I would like to start by saying that, from my point of view, it's of paramount importance very important that we take this topic into account take it seriously for many several different reasons.
Thank you for your help in advance!
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I think this is the most natural way to say (not write) this. Your original text would "sound" a little odd to a native speaker if you were to say it exactly that way.
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Preparing a monologue...
Hi! Could you correct me, please?I'm preparing a presentation for next Tuesday and I would like to start like this:
Good morning!
My name is Mercedes, although you can call me Merce for short. because many people call me Merce as well. At the moment, I am studying History and Arts. Going forward, I would like to work as a civil servant in a high school.
Today, the topic that I have been given is... I'm not an expert in this topic, but I would like to start by saying that, from my point of view, it is of paramount importance that we take this topic into account for many different reasons.
Thank you for your help in advance!
1
Preparing a monologue...
Hi! Can you correct me, please?I'm writing a presentation for next Tuesday and I want to start like this:
Good morning, my name is Mercedes, but you can call me Merce for short. Presently, I study History and Arts and am seeking a position as a civil servant in a high school.
Today, the topic that I have been given is... I'm not an expert in this topic, but I would like to start by saying that, from my point of view, it is of paramount importance that we take this topic into account for many different reasons.
Thank you for your help in advance!
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