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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?Some people believe that people’s characteristics to a large extent determine what kind of person he or she will be when they grow up. However, I think experience has more impacts on their lives.
Personalities are mostly cultivated in childhood. Parents’ education plays a crucial part in fostering children’s personalities, because no one can distinguish whether a baby was active or shy when the baby was given a birth born. The way to build (develop sounds better) personalities (characteristic - enthusiasm is a characteristic that forms part of a personality) such as enthusiasm is to simulate (imitate sounds better) their parents’ behaviors. For example, if parents encourage them to communicate more with others, they tend to be more outgoing.
It is proven that children are curious about new things and are easy to be influence easily influenced by experience in their lives. Furthermore, the fact that people are more likely to be employed if they have more work experience, must mean that more experience is beneficial to their development. Successful men cannot succeed without knowledge accumulated from failure. For instance, Edison invented electric light after thousands of experiments, most of which failed as a consequence. In terms of countries’ a country's development, it is impossible for a country to be more advanced in all aspects than other countries when it is first formed. There are revolutions and campaigns that manifest from a prolonged history and provides good experience to presidents who can make countries develop rapidly and healthily.
On the other hand, it does not mean that intrinsic or hereditary characteristics are not significant to people’s personalities. However, although successful people can contribute part of their success to their talents, they cannot realise achievements without being recognized by others and provided with opportunities.
In conclusion, I admit that the characteristics we are born with do influence our personal growth, although experience is more important to not only their personalities but also their development.
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