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How to keep safe if you go walking in the mountains You probably think that mountains are always friendly and it is just a pleasure to walk around and enjoy beautiful views. In most cases you will be right but mountains are a huge force that sometimes shows you who are the boss here. But don’t be afraid. If you are a planning a walk in the mountains area you just have to follow some basic rules which can help you to make your journey safe and sound. You should to get prepared. Make sure that you have all necessary equipment with you such as map, compass, whistle, rope and flashlight. Map and compass help you to find right direction if you got lost. Don’t forget to charge your phone in case to be able to call emergency service and whistle and flashlight help them find you faster. It is better if you you go walking with someone but if you decided to go along don’t forget to tell you best friend or to some relatives your route in accurate details so they would know where you are at any moment. Make sure you have enough water. You will be physically active and lose a lot of water. For the restoration of the water-salt balance you should drink a lot of water. It is necessary to feel great and stay in a good mood. As you see, nothing special, but this tips can save you life one day.

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How to Stay Safe If You Go Walking in the Mountains <-- Titles need to be properly capitalized in American English.

You probably think that mountains are always safe and it is just a pleasure to walk around and enjoy beautiful views. In most cases you will be right but mountains are a huge force that sometimes show you who the boss is. But don’t be afraid. If you are planning Putting "a" between "are" and "planning" is slangish / country folk sounding a walk in mountainous areas you just have to follow some basic rules which can help you to make your journey safe and sound.

You should be prepared. Make sure that you have all necessary equipment with you such as a map, a compass, a whistle, rope and a flashlight.

Maps and compasses help you (to -- this is optional in American English) find the right direction if you get lost. Don’t forget to charge your phone so you will be able to call emergency services and a whistle and a flashlight to help them find you faster.  <--- or "so you will be able to call for help"

It is better if you go walking with someone but if you decide to go alone don’t forget to tell your best friend or some relatives your route in accurate details so they will know where you are at any moment.

Make sure you have enough water. You will be physically active and lose a lot of water. To maintain the water-salt balance you should drink a lot of water. It is necessary to feel great and stay in a good mood. <--- I would probably say "To stay hydrated, you should drink a lot of water."

As you see, this advice is nothing special, but these tips could save your life one day.

Great job!

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How to keep safe when walking in the mountains

You probably think that mountains are always friendly and it is just a pleasure to walk around and enjoy beautiful views. In most cases you will be right but the mountain is a huge force who sometimes shows you who is the boss there. But don’t worry. If you are a planning a walk in the mountains you just have to follow some basic rules which can help make your journey safe and sound.

You should come prepared. Make sure that you have all necessary equipment with you such as map, compass, whistle, mobile phone, rope and flashlight.

Map and compass help you to find the right direction if you get lost. Don’t forget to charge your phone in case of an emergency service call, and a whistle and flashlight will help them to find you faster.

It is better if you you go walking with someone but if you decide to go alone don’t forget to tell you best friend or some relatives your precise route so they can know where you are at any moment.

Make sure that you have enough water. You will be physically active and lose a lot of water. For the restoration of your water-salt balance you should drink a lot of water. It is necessary to feel great and to stay chirpy.

As you see, nothing special, but these tips can save you life one day.

Very useful and well written!

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when i read your blog i remember into the wild movie ! i love to go walking specially on safe way ! so thanks !

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