Today's work
I had one conference at work today.
The conference was related to a publicity of our department.
I'm in charge of the publicity in our department.
Before the conference started,I had to proofread the content of our department's publicity paper.
Moreover, If I had taken the request to post something more on the paper during the conference,
I would have proofread that one more time.
Fortunately ,none of the attendants in the conference had request.
So as soon as I finished the conference, I could contact a printer and order them to start printing our paper.
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Today's work
I had one conference at work today.The conference was related to a the publicity of our department.
I'm in charge of the publicity in our department.
Before the conference started, [add a space here]I had to proofread the content of our department's publicity paper.
[I think a sentence is missing here? Try this: ] However, I had very little time to do so. Moreover And if I had taken the accepted a request to post something more on the paper during the conference,
I would have to proofread that it one more time. That would slow me down from getting it printed.
Fortunately ,none* of the attendants in attendees of the conference had request asked for the publicity piece.
So as soon as I finished the conference, I could contact a printer and order them* to start the printing our paper right away.
This is nice little piece, Tetsu. I think you can use the simple past when you are telling your story. Also, I added some phrases, just to help you make your point. On the comment *: "printer" needs a singular noun, not "them." But it is awkard to say "him or her," so I suggested a change in wording. Hope this helps!
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Today's work
I had a conference at work today.The conference was related to a publicity of our department.
I'm in charge of the publicity in our department.
Before the conference started, I had to proofread the content of our department's publicity paper.
Moreover, if I had taken the request to post something more on the paper during the conference,
I would have had to proofread that one more time. again.
Fortunately , none of the attendants in the conference had a request.
So as soon as I finished the conference, I contacted a printer to start printing our paper.
For the last sentence it seemed fine but if you're wanting to use past tense then this is what sounds natural to me. You're English is still pretty good though.
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