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Is this how I should make the Experience part of my CV Experience Banco Nacional de Costa Rica (September 2013 - December 2016) Customer service: performing customer service, answering call center, response to customer complaints, analysis of marketing results to meet goals of sales in banking products, management of executive reports and analysis of the information generated by the banking systems of credit and operational areas, provide various information to customers of the products and services offered by the bank. Cashier: Do all the bank’s own transactions, cash management and advice on banking products to customers. thank you for your help!

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Experience

Banco Nacional de Costa Rica (September 2013 - December 2016)

Customer service:

Performing customer service [1], answering calls center, responding [2] to customer complaints, analysing  of marketing results to meet goals of sales in banking products sales goals, managing of executive reports and analysing of the information generated by the banking systems of concerning credit and operational areas, providing various information to customers of the regarding the products and services offered by the bank.


Cashier:

Do all Processing the bank’s own transactions, cash management and providing advice on banking products to customers [or: providing advice to customers on banking products].



[1] This point is problematic as it basically covers everything that follows

[2] As you started using the present participle, "answering", you need to stick to it, otherwise, although some of the points are not grammatically incorrect, they 'read' inconsistently with the rest.

Note: I've only corrected errors. In terms of overall style, you might want to consult a careers website to get a better idea of the requirements for a CV. The style of a CV is very subjective and varies between industries and countries.

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