My pleasure.
Recently, I have correctted some people's essay who want to enhance Chinese, I feel it's very nice to help others. Before, I just think how to improve my English, and don't care others, but now, I feel it's wrong and selfness. We need to help each other in order to improve ourselves. In real life, it's important for us to depend on others, we can not live if without others. So thank you for correcting my essay. Also, if you have any problems in Chinese, tell me, I try my best to help you.
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My pleasure.
Recently, I have corrected some people's essays who want to enhance their Chinese skill, because I think it's very nice to help others. Before, I only thought of how to improve my English, and did not care for others. However I now feel this is wrong. and selfness. We need to help each other in order to improve ourselves. In real life, it's important for us to depend on others, as we can not live if without each other. So thank you for correcting my essay. Also, if you have any problems in with Chinese, tell me, and I'll try my best to help you.Good job, your English is good :)
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My pleasure.
Recently, I have corrected some people's essay who want to enhance their Chinese level, I feel it's very nice to help others. Before this, I just thought about how to improve my English, and did not care for others, but now, I feel it's wrong and selfness. We need to help each other in order to improve ourselves. In real life, it's important for us to depend on others, we can not live if without others. So thank you for correcting my essay. Also, if you have any problems in Chinese, tell me, I try my best to help you.0
My pleasure.
Recently, I have correctted some people's essay who want to enhance thier Chinese, I feel it's very nice to help others. Before, I just think thought how to improve my English, and don't didn't care for others, but now, I feel it's wrong and selfness. We need to help each other in order to improve ourselves. In real life, it's important for us to be depended on each others. we can not live if without others. So thank you for correcting my essay. Also, if you have any problems in ChineseI , tell me, I try my best to help you.0
My pleasure.
Recently, I have correctted some people's essay who want to enhance Chinese, I feel it's very nice to help others. Before, I just think how to improve my English, and don't care others, but now, I feel it's wrong and selfness. We need to help each other in order to improve ourselves. In real life, it's important for us to depend on others, we can not live if without others. So thank you for correcting my essay. Also, if you have any problems in Chinese, tell me, I try my best to help you.Well done:) you have improved your writing. I am proud of you.
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Recently, I have corrected some people's essay the essays of some people who want to enhance improve their Chinese. I feel it's very nice to help others. Before, I just used to think about how I could improve my English, and didn't care about helping others, but now, I feel it's that was wrong and selfness selfish of me. We need to help each other in order to improve ourselves. In real life, it's important for us to depend on others. We cannot live if without others other people. So thank you for correcting my essay. Also, if you have any problems in Chinese, tell me. I will try my best to help you.Grammar
After the word "before", you must use the past tense, not the present tense. Saying "before" implies that you are speaking about the past.
You cannot say "essays who"
"Who" is a relative pronoun used for people only. "Who" is not used for inanimate objects. For inanimate objects, we use "that" or "which" as relative pronouns instead.
Therefore, you need to put the word "who" after the word "people" (not after the word "essays").
Semantics
Even supposing that "who" were the correct pronoun for an inanimate object (which is is not), your sentence makes no sense semantically.
The essays do not want to learn Chinese. The people want to learn Chinese! :D
I hope you understand. :)
Other than that, it was very good! Well done :)
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