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The zone. Please check my essay, i need your help. The zone Tell us about your favourite way to get lost in a simple activity — running, chopping vegetables, folding laundry, whatever. What’s it like when you’re in “the zone”? I think that everyone has their own way to get lost in a simple activity. Everyone sometimes gets stress or just being upset, but spending some time on some activity can culms them down, and makes their minds clear. Some of my friends like driving a car, walking, swimming and so on. I don`t have a car, if I am in a bad mood the road to the closest swimming pool will take much time, so I find my "zone" in walking, jogging, and reading. I used to do jogging to be fit. But now I do it, if I am very angry, or someone hurt me. If I am sad, or I have some problems, walking helps me to clear my minds, gets culm. I choose the way I didn`t walk before and just go, it could take an hour, or more. But it is a good way to gets better, to thinks it over, to finds some answers and solutions. Some of my friends tells that it is a bit strange, but I don`t agree with them. Only you can consider whether it is good or bad. If it helps you and doesn`t hurt your health i think it is a good way of relaxing, at least it is better than drinking. Also i like reading when i feel upset and want to get in my "zone" - but than i have to read some of chapters anew because i don`t remember what were there. When I do these activity I don`t pay attention on things happening around me, and I`m appearing in a different place, where my minds are clear, where I can think it over without and interruptions and bothering and then find good solutions to each of my problem. It is a good world, but I`m not an often guest there. Because you have to be very good at it to make me angry, upset or etc. :)

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The zone. Please check my essay, i need your help.

The zone
Tell us about your favourite way to get lost in a simple activity — running, chopping vegetables, folding laundry, whatever. What’s it like when you’re in “the zone”?

I think that everyone has their own way to get lost in a simple activity. Everyone gets stressed or just become upset sometimes, but spending some time on a particular activity can calm a person down, and make his mind clearer. Some of my friends like driving a car, walking, swimming and so on. I don't have a car and it takes too long to get to the nearest swimming pool, so I find my "zone" in walking, jogging, and reading.

I used to jog to keep fit. But now I do it if I am very angry, or when someone has hurt me.
If I am sad or have some problems, walking helps me to clear my mind and become calmer. I will choose a way I didn't walk before and just go. It could take an hour or more. But it is a good way to get better, to think it over, to find some answers and solutions. Some of my friends tell that my method is a bit strange, but I don't agree with them. Only you can decide whether your method is good or bad. If it helps you and doesn't hurt your health, I think it is a good way to relax. Walking is at least better than drinking. I also like reading when I feel upset and want to get into my "zone". But I have to then read some chapters I have already read anew because i don't remember what they are.


When I engage in these activities I don't pay attention to things happening around me, and it seems to me that I'm in a different place, where my mind is clear, where I can think about things over without interruptions and find good solutions to each of my problems. It is a good world, but I`m not an often guest there.(This is an awkward sentence.) I seldom enter a state of being lost these activities because I seldom become so angry  or upset that I have to do so. Because you have to be very good at it to make me angry, upset or etc. :)

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I think that everyone has their own way to get lost in a simple activity. Everyone sometimes Sometimes, everyone gets stressed or just being gets upset, but spending some time on some activity can calm s them down, and makes their minds clear. Some of my friends like driving a car, walking, swimming and so on. I don`t have a car, if I am in a bad mood, the road to the closest swimming pool will take much time, so I find my "zone" in walking, jogging, and reading.

I used to do jogging to be fit. But now I do it, if I am very angry, or someone hurt me.
If I am sad, or I have some problems, walking helps me to clear my minds, gets calm. I choose the way I didn`t walk before and just go, it could take an hour, or more (I just choose a path I haven't walked before and walk for an hour or more.). But it is a good way to gets better, to thinks it over, to finds some answers and solutions (Sorry, I can't explain why, but these don't need to be plural). Some of my friends tells think that it is a bit strange, but I don`t agree with them. Only you can consider whether it is good or bad. If it helps you and doesn`t hurt your health, i think it is a good way of relaxing, at least it is better than drinking.
Also i like reading when i feel upset and want to get in my "zone" - but than i have to read some of chapters anew because i don`t remember what were there.
When I do these activity activities I don`t pay attention on to things happening around me, and I`m appearing in a different place I feel like I'm in a different place, where my minds are clear, where I can think it over without interruptions and or bothering and then find good solutions to each of my problems.  (Hm, maybe something more like "Things are usually pretty good, so I don't need to go to my "zone" very often.").

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