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Alina's notebook entry: Jun 22, 2010-- telephoned father Last sunday is father‘s festive.I telephoned my father. My father is 52 years old.I work in Shenzhen，GuangDong province.My parents live in NingXiao Hui autonomous region. We are in different region and far away（离得很远.I miss them so much. I telephoned my father and told him that father’fastive was come.I wish him have good health(身体健康）and all the best. But my father told me we are chinese，we must‘t 过洋节。 Oh！My father。

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Alina's notebook entry: Jun 22, 2010 -- telephoning to (or: calling) my father

Last Sunday was the Father‘s festive Day.  I telephoned to (or: I called) my father.  My father is 52 years old. 

I work in Shenzhen, GuangDong province.  My parents live in the NingXiao Hui autonomous (?) region.  We are in different regions and far away (离得很远) from each other.  I miss them so much.

I telephoned to my father and told him that father’fastive it was come the Father's Day.  I wish him have good health (身体健康) and all the best.  But my father told me that we are Chinese, and we need not to be bothered by such Western cultures (or: customs).  ，we must‘t 过洋节。   Oh！My father。


Good day.  /  祝　是日安好。
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I Telephoned My Father

Last Sunday was Father‘s Day.
I called my father.
My dad is 52 years old.
I work in Shenzhen, in GuangDong province.
My parents live in the NingXiao Hui autonomous region.
We are in different regions and are far away from each other.
I miss them so much!
I called my father and told him that it was Father’s Day.
I wished him good health and all the best.
But my father told me we are Chinese, we mustn‘t [celebrate Father's Day - ???].
Oh! My father!

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I Telephoned My Father Last Sunday was Father‘s Day. I called my father. My dad is 52 years old. I work in Shenzhen, in GuangDong province. My parents live in the NingXiao Hui autonomous region. We are in different regions and far away from each other. I miss them so much! I called my father and told him that it was Father’s Day. I wished him good health and all the best. But my father told me we are Chinese, we mustn‘t [celebrate Father's Day - ???]. Oh! My father!
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