Summary: package holidays
This text deals with the promotion of package holidays.
The author shows, narrating her own experiences, how they are underrated. As a matter of fact, they are actually considered as "mainstream" and people prefer booking their holidays online. In spite of this, it is said that this kind of planned journeys gives you the opportunity to visit new places without wasting your money.
According to the narrator, package holidays are the best choice for travellers who don't care about uncomfortable hotels and want to experience new and different ways of travelling. Moreover, she insists on their cheapness describing some of her previous trips. Indeed, once she and her boyfriend booked an affordable package to Crete. Despite the disappointing hotel, they nevertheless found the way to relax and enjoy themselves.
In conclusion, we can say that the main aim of this text is to revalue this kind of experiences.
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Summary: package holidays
This text deals with the promotion of package holidays.The author shows, narrating recounting* her own experiences, how they are underrated. As a matter of fact, they are actually considered (as) "mainstream" and people prefer booking their holidays online. In spite of this, it is said that this kind of planned journeys gives you the opportunity to visit new places without wasting your money.
According to the narrator {better: commentator}, package holidays are the best choice for travellers who don't care about uncomfortable hotels and want to experience new and different ways of travelling. Moreover, she insists on their cheapness,** {better: frugality, thriftiness} describing some of her previous trips. Indeed, once she and her boyfriend once booked an affordable package to Crete.*** Despite the disappointing hotel, they nevertheless found the a way to relax and enjoy themselves.
In conclusion, we can say that the main aim of this text is to reevaluate these kinds of experiences.
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*Slight nuance here, but "to narrate" would be like reading a book out loud.
**"Cheapness" has a negative connotation, so "frugality" or "thriftiness" sounds better here to convey the idea of not being wasteful or excessive in their spending habits.
***The structure "Once she and her boyfriend..." suggests a succession of events. Example: "Once she and her boyfriend arrived at the gate, they ran full sprint across the terminal to make their connecting flight."
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