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Make me happy make me worry. I have a timid wife. She doesn’t even dare to go out after 21:00. Every time when she comes home a bit late, she is certain to call me to go picking her up. No matter whether you are willing or not, you have to do. Today is a typical example. She came back from her mother’s. Because she didn’t buy a ticket, she took the later train to return our place. The train arrived at station at 21:08. So she had called me and ordered me to go to the station to pick her up. Coincidently, I worked overtime today. When I left for my company, it had been 20:00 then. I calculated the time, it was proper if I went to pick her up from the station. So I did. It rained when we returned home, it was just a shower, we took subway then we transformed a bus. The rain didn’t bother us too much. All was well, but the only fly in the ointment is that I didn’t eat anything for my supper. Poor me.

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Make me happy make me worry.

I have a timid wife. She doesn’t even dare to go out after 21:00. Every time she comes home a bit late, she is certain to call me to pick her up. Whether you are willing or not, you have to do it.
Today is a typical example. She came back from her mother’s. Because she didn’t buy a ticket, she took the later train to return to our place. The train arrived at the station at 21:08. So she called me and ordered me to go to the station to pick her up. Coincidently, I worked overtime today. When I left for my company, it was 20:00. I calculated the time- it was proper to pick her up from the station. So I did. (this wording could be improved)
It rained when we returned home. It was just a shower. We took the subway then we transferred to a bus. The rain didn’t bother us too much. All was well, but the only fly in the ointment is that I didn’t eat anything for my supper. Poor me.


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