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Makassar I was born and raised in Makassar, a seaside city in an Indonesian Island called Sulawesi or Celebes. Makassar is the biggest city in East Indonesia with over 1.6 million population in 199.26 km2 wide area. There is a lot of tourism spot you can go if you visited Makassar, but the two most popular spot is Losari Beach and Fort Rotterdam. It's pretty easy to spot because Fort Rotterdam situated near Losari Beach. Most people come to Losari beach to see sunset because sunset in losari is the most beautiful sight you could ever see, at least in my opinion and I have seen a lot of sunset in a lot of place. And Fort Rotterdam is a big Fort built in 17th century by Gowa Kingdom to fight against Colonial. This builing still in a good shape and stil original.

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Makassar

I was born and raised in Makassar, a seaside city on the Indonesian island of Sulawesi, otherwise known as Celebes. Makassar is the biggest city in Eastern Indonesia, with a population of over 1.6 million and a land area of 199.26 km2.

There are a lot of tourist spots you can visit if you go to Makassar, but the two most popular spots are Losari Beach and Rotterdam Fort. It's pretty easy to spot Rotterdam Fort because it's situated near Losari Beach. Most people come to Losari beach to see the sunset because sunsets in Losari are the most beautiful sight you could ever see, at least in my opinion, and I have seen a lot of sunsets in  many different places.


Fort Rotterdam is a big fort built in the 17th century by Gowa Kingdom, to fight against the Colonials. It's still well mantained and retains its original features.

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Beberapa nasihat:

- "are" is used for plural nouns, and "is" is used for singular nouns. Menggunakanlah kata jamak yang benar!

- name the noun (ie. Rotterdam Fort) pada bagian permulaan kalimat, kemudian anda boleh mengunnakan kata "it's"

- word order is switched, ie. Fort Rotterdam --> Rotterdam Fort /// noun + adjective ----> adjective + noun

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