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Describe a bedroom. Again please help me to check my mistake My bedroom is the best well-ordered place in my house. The size of my room is about 4x4 m, it is not too big but it is enough for me. In the right side of my room there is a big gray frame of picture of my family hung on the wall. Under it is an amazing bed which has a magical white canopy. Also, on the bed, there is a velvety pink coverlet that is full with stunning pillows and teddy bears. Beside my bed, you can see a big window with a simple violet color curtain that looks so luxurious, and from the window, I can feel the wind blowing with the beautiful morning sunlight making my room become perfect like my little heaven. In the left corner, there is a simple white desk with a brown chair. I keep my study books and equipment for studying in drawers next to the desk. Above my desk, I hang a small board with positive posts, so it helps me have an optimistic feeling. My bedroom is combination of attractive colors which are mixed perfectly and it shows the girlie room. It is also completed with some artificial flowers near the window that decorate my room beautifully. In conclusion, all things in my bedroom are put at the right place to make a clean and calm feeling and I like my small heaven so much.

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Describe a bedroom. Again please help me to check my mistake

My bedroom is the best most well-ordered place in my house. The size of my room is about 4x4m. It is not too big but it is enough for me. In the right side of my room there is a big gray frame of picture picture frame of my family hung on the wall. Under it is an amazing bed which has a magical white canopy. Also, on the bed, there is a velvety pink coverlet that is full with stunning pillows and teddy bears. Beside my bed, you can see a big window with a simple violet colored* curtain that looks so luxurious, and from the window, I can feel the wind blowing with the beautiful morning sunlight making my room become perfect like my little heaven. In the left corner, there is a simple white desk with a brown chair. I keep my study books and equipment for studying in drawers next to the desk. Above my desk, I hang a small board with positive posts, so it helps me have an optimistic feeling. My bedroom is has a combination of attractive colors which are mixed perfectly and it shows the girlie it is a girl's room. It is also completed with some artificial flowers near the window that decorate my room beautifully. In conclusion, all things in my bedroom are put at the right place to make a clean and calm feeling and I like my small heaven so much.

*: You don't have to write 'colored', you can just write 'violet curtain' if you want.

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