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My day My Day today the tenth day of Ramadan month , I started my day by eating meal with my family to prepare of fast, and we talk together after that i went to the mosque and pray then when I come back to my house I survey the net and chatting with friends and I watched a movie I like the movie after this i get sleep and wake maybe 10:00 pm I don't have to wake early due to I'm in vacation , after I wake up and taking a shower and shaving i go I hanged out with my friend for tree hours or four. and when I come back to home I red a book not a whole book put some parts of it, then I went to my father's farm with my brothers and help him in until the sunset then we ate our breakfast together and with two stuff they working in the farm. and when I come back to my home again I was tired so i take a path and laying and watching movie. it was a tired day .

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My day

My Day
Today, the tenth day of Ramadan month, I started my day by eating a meal with my family in preparation for the fast.  After talking together (for a while), I went to the mosque and prayed. Then, when I came back to my house, I surfed the net, chatted with friends, and I watched a movie. I liked the movie. Then I went to sleep and woke up around 10:00 pm. I don't have to wake up early because I'm on vacation. After waking up,  and taking a shower, and shaving, I went out with my friend for three or four hours.
and When I came back to home, I read a book (not a whole book, but some parts of it) and then I went to my father's farm with my brothers and helped him in until the sunset. Then we ate our breakfast together and with two stuff they working in the farm.(?)
and I was tired when I came back to my home again, so I took a bath, laid down, and watched a movie.
It was a tiring day.


Great job ya Saleh. There was only one sentence I did not understand. You should be proud of your entry and your English skills. Some corrections were stylistic. For example, it was correct to say "..a meal with my family to prepare for the fast", but I thought I'd suggest another possible way: "..in preparation for the fast". 

Keep it up,

David

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My Day

Today the tenth day of Ramadan month , I started my day by eating a meal with my family to prepare for the fast.  We talked together, and after that I went to the mosque and prayed. Then when I came back to my house, I surfed the net, chatted with friends and watched a movie.

I liked the movie. After that I went to sleep and woke up maybe at 10:00 pm. I don't have to wake early due to I'm on vacation. After I woke up, took a shower and shaved, I went to hang out with my friend for three or four hours.


And when I came back home I read a book - not a whole book, but some parts of it. Then I went to my father's farm with my brothers and helped him until the sunset. Then we ate our breakfast together and with two stuff they working in the farm (?).
And when I came back to my home again I was tired, so I took a path (nap?) and laid watching a movie.
it was a tiring day.

Good job! Keep at it. - Lacey


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