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Travels... I like to travel a lot with my family. Generally our travels do not last long (for financial reasons !). These are trips of 3 or 4 days. Last year we spent some days in Lisbon and Milan. One of the best times I like is when we arrive at the destination airport. All of a sudden we find ourselves immersed in a different country. Sound, pictures, advertising : all is different. Often we rent an accomodation with websites like airbnb. Then we meet the owner of the accomodation. It's a time shared with him. It's a opportunity to speak about a lot of things. The landlord can give us good adresses to go for lunch for example. We do not like tourist attractions and prefer to try to live like the locals. Each time these trips are as a small bowl of oxygen...

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Travels...

I like to travel a lot with my family. Generally our travels trips do not last long (for financial reasons !). These are trips of 3 or 4 days. Last year we spent some days time in Lisbon and Milan.
One of the best times I like parts of traveling is when we arrive at the destination airport. All of a sudden we find ourselves immersed in a different country. Sound, pictures, advertising : all everything is different.
Often we rent an accomodation accommodation with websites like airbnb. Then we meet the owner of the accomodation accommodation. It's a time shared with him. It's a an opportunity to speak about a lot of things. For example, the landlord can recommend locations for lunch. give us good adresses to go for lunch for example.
We do not like tourist attractions and prefer to try to live like the locals. Each time these trips are as a small bowl of oxygen... Each time these trips are as small as a bowl of oxygen...


My Comments:

1) When using grammatical punctuation like the exclamation point (!) and the colon (:), do not put a space in front of the symbol.

2) When using the indefinite article "a", you must use the article "an" if the following word starts with a vowel (that is "a" "e" "i" "o" or "u").

3) I do not understand the sentence "It's a time shared with him." Is the owner of the airbnb accommodation always a man (since you used the pronoun him)? Maybe you meant to say, "We spend some time with the owner."

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Travels...

I like to travel a lot with my family. Generally speaking, our travels do not last long due to financial reasons! These are trips of 3 or 4 days. Last year we spent some time/days in Lisbon and Milan.
I love it when we arrive at the destination airport. All of a sudden we find ourselves immersed in a different country. Sounds, images, the means of advertising : everything is different.
Often we search for accommodation by using websites such as airbnb. Then we meet the owner of the flat/room/apartment and spend some time shared with him. It's an opportunity to speak about a lot of things. The owner(s) might even suggest some good restaurants or other sightseeings.
We do not like tourist attractions and prefer trying to live like the locals. Each time these trips breathe new air to our lives...
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Travels...

I like to travel a lot with my family. Generally our travels do not last long (for financial reasons !). These are trips of 3 or 4 days. Last year we spent some days in Lisbon and Milan.
One of my favorite times is when we arrive at the destination airport. All of a sudden we find ourselves immersed in a different culture. Sound, pictures, advertising : everything is different.
Often we rent an accommodation with websites like airbnb. Then we meet the owner of the accommodation. It's a time shared with him. It's a opportunity to speak about a many things. The landlord can give us good locations to go for lunch for example.
We do not like tourist attractions and prefer to try to live like the locals. Each time these trips are like a breath of fresh air.
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Travels...

I like to travel a lot with my family. Generally our travels do not last long (for financial reasons !). These trips are trips of 3 or 4 days. Last year we spent some time days (OR "we spent several days")in Lisbon and Milan.
One of the best times I like is when we arrive at the destination airport. All of a sudden we find ourselves immersed in a different country. Sound, pictures, advertising : alleverything is different.
Often we rent an accomodation with websites like airbnb. Then we meet the owner of the accomodation (NOTE: this is implied from the previous sentence, you don't need it). It's a time shared with him. It's a opportunity to speak about a lot of things. The landlord can give us good adresses to go for lunch for example.
We do not like tourist attractions and prefer to try to live like the locals. Each time these trips are as a small bowl of oxygen... (NOTE: We don't have this saying [at least in Canada/America]...try "Each time these trips feel too short" or "Unfortunately, time flies when I travel")

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