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What Happens to Your Body after You Die The video is placed here https://youtu.be/SIssA4pdlXU -Death sucks -But what happens to your body after you die is fascinating, -So we are going to show you -Don't worry it won't be gross much -Once the person's breathing stops the cells in their body stop perceiving oxygen -But the cells continue to live for several minutes generating carbon dioxide -Carbon dioxide is acidic -and it builds up rupturing sacs inside the cells -these sacs contain enzymes to begin to the digest the cells from the inside out -this creates a blister like fluid rich in nutrients -after about a week those nutrients fuel an army of bacteria and fungi further liquify organs and muscles -Microbes that attack the tissue produce of bewildering array of more than four hundred chemicals and gases -They include Freon -That is right the coolant found in refrigerators Benzene a powerful component in Gasoline -Sulfur which smells of swamps end rotten eggs -And a molecule known as Carbon Tetrachloride -Which was used in fire extinquishers and dry-cleaning until scientists discovered it is highly toxic -At this point there is very little fresh left -and it is consumed by here comes maggots and beetles (Затем оно поглощается лечинками и жуками) -Insects leave only bones behind (Насекомые оставляют после себя только кости) -Over time the protein in bone decomposes too, leaving just the bone mineral called Hydroxyapatite -Which eventually turns to dust -We can take some solace in the fact, in all those nutrients and chemicals even the dust -provide vital substances that make soils fertile -sprouting plants and other new life -after our lives have ended -Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust

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What Happens to Your Body after You Die

The video is placed here https://youtu.be/SIssA4pdlXU

-Death sucks
-But what happens to your body after you die is fascinating,
-So we are going to show it to you
-Don't worry. It won't be too gross much
-Once the person's breathing stops, the cells in their body stop receiving oxygen
-But the cells continue to live for several minutes, generating carbon dioxide
-Carbon dioxide is acidic
-and it builds up, rupturing sacs inside the cells
-These sacs contain enzymes which begin to the digest the cells from the inside out
-This creates a blister-like fluid rich in nutrients
-After about a week, those nutrients fuel an army of bacteria and fungi which further liquify [Variant spelling: liquefy] organs and muscles
-Microbes that attack the tissue produce a bewildering array of more than four hundred chemicals and gases
-They include (1) Freon. That is right -- the coolant found in refrigerators; (2) Benzene, a powerful component in gasoline; (3) Sulfur, which smells of swamps end rotten eggs; and (4) A molecule known as Carbon Tetrachloride, which was used in fire extinguishers and dry-cleaning until scientists discovered it is highly toxic
-At this point, there is very little fresh tissue left, and it is consumed by here comes maggots and beetles (Затем оно поглощается лечинками и жуками)
-Insects leave only the bones behind (Насекомые оставляют после себя только кости)
-Over time, the protein in bone decomposes too, leaving just the bone mineral called Hydroxyapatite, which eventually turns to dust
-We can take some solace in the fact that in all those nutrients and chemicals -- even the dust -- provide vital substances that make soils fertile, sprouting plants and giving birth to other new life after our lives have ended
-Ashes to ashes, dust to dust


It would be preferable to put a period after each sentence.


I must say, you chose an original topic!



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https://www.amazon.com/When-We-Die-Science-Culture/dp/0312264119#productDescription_secondary_view_div_1496432375814

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