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Second 10 words Have you ever wanted to write a thesis about important subject for you? If you would be beyond this life, these problems? Sometimes our real life seems like not dream from our thoughts. Sometimes we were gasped by our daily problems. If somebody told us about our choice with profession: "Watch out! You can make mistake. Think about it. Maybe it's not your life. Maybe it's life for calming your parents..." But we made choice and sometimes it's right, but sometimes it's not. Once you wake up in the morning and begin to pant. You want to scream so hard, that all bad thoughts, all pain could get away from you with screaming. A lack of happiness is no longer secret. Major lack is not always happiness. Sometimes it is love or care or something else. So it's our estate in the world. Sometimes we need our problems turn into feathers, white easy feathers and you can blow it and there is nothing bad around and inside you.

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Have you ever wanted to write a thesis about something important to you? If you were beyond this life, these problems? Sometimes our real life intrudes on our dreams and our thoughts. Sometimes we are exasperated by our daily problems. If somebody told us about our choice of profession: "Watch out! You can make a mistake. Think about it. Maybe it's not your life. Maybe it's the life for calming your parents..."** But we make our choice and sometimes it's right, but sometimes it's not. Suddenly you wake up in the morning and begin to pant. You want to scream so hard that all bad thoughts and all pain are screamed away. Your sadness is no longer secret. Major lack is not always happiness*. Sometimes it is love or care or something else. So it's our lot in the world. Sometimes we need that our problems turn into feathers, light, white feathers that we can blow away until there is nothing bad around and inside us.

*I didn't understand this sentence.

**or, maybe it's lived to placate your parents. Your version is also very good.

Very well written!

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