There is nothing that we as individuals can do to prevent climate change
Nowadays climate change is on of the most important problems in the world. There have been done a lot of researches about it. One of them says that climate change is a natural process and there is nothing to afraid about, another says that it is all human fault. In most cases I believe that there is something that we as individuals can do to prevent climate changes in the world. We can contribute "greening" our habits and slightly changing the way of life.
Firstly, it is possible to mitigate the effects of climate change planting tree, buying energy-saving bulb or simply turn off the light where it is unnecessary right now.
Secondly, we can be wiser and choosy as consumers. Buy product which were produced in the same region where we live whereas thousand miles away. In addition, we can minimize waste products of life refusing disposable packaging and plastic dishes.
Finally, we can use public transport or ride a bicycle instead our cars.
In conclusion, every person can contribute teaching their children and share these ideas with other people. So as you can see there are a lot of things that we as individuals can do to prevent climate change!
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There is nothing that we, as individuals, can do to prevent climate change
Nowadays climate change is one of the most important problems in the world. There are a lot of researches on it (Alternatively: A great amount/deal of research has been conducted on the subject). One of them says that (Consider rephrasing this to: According to one such research,) climate change is a natural process and there is nothing to be afraid of (alternatively: nothing to worry about), while another suggests/mentions/concludes that it is all due to human fault. In most cases I believe that there is something that we, as individuals, can do to prevent climate change(s) in the world. We can contribute, by "greening" our habits... (consider rephrasing this to something like: adopting a more eco-friendly attitude thereby improving the quality of our life.Firstly, it is possible to mitigate the effects of climate change by planting trees, buying energy-saving bulbs or simply by turning off the lights whenever possible.
Secondly, we should act more wisely as consumers. We could buy products which are produced locally as opposed to products which are produced thousand miles away. In addition, we can minimize waste products of life by refusing disposable packaging and plastic dishes (consider rewriting this, e.g.: reusing eco-friendly and recyclable materials).
Finally, we can use public transportation or (perhaps) ride a bicycle instead of using our cars.
In conclusion, every person can contribute by teaching their children (suggestion: to respect the environment) and by sharing these ideas with other people. So, as you can see there are a lot of things that we, as individuals, can do to prevent climate change!
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There is Nothing That We as Individuals Can Do to Prevent Climate Change
Nowadays climate change is one of the most important problems / issues -- I prefer the word issues here. in the world. A lot of research has been done on it. -- or "There has been a lot of research done on it." One of them concluded -- "Says" is so informal and not scientific sounding. A better verb for talking about studies is "to conclude". that climate change is a natural process and that there is nothing to be afraid of -- or "and that there is nothing to worry about" -- or "and that there is no reason to worry about it"; -- two independent sentences are connected with a semicolon, not a comma. another concluded that it is all due to human factors. In most cases I believe that there is something that we, as individuals, can do to prevent climate change in the world. We can contribute by being greener in terms of our habits and by changing how we live slightly.
Firstly, it is possible to mitigate the effects of climate change by planting trees, buying energy-saving light bulbs -- light bulbs sounds better for a piece on a science related topic in my opinion. Bulbs is the short / slang version of the word. or simply by turning off lights whenever possible -- or "lights when they aren't needed"
Secondly, we should be wiser as consumers. For instance, we could buy products which were produced locally instead of thousand miles away. In addition, we could -- I am using "could" here so it matches/is balanced with the could of the previous sentence. minimize the waste products of daily life by not throwing away packaging and plastic dishes, but instead finding new uses for them.
Finally, we also could use public transportation more often or ride a bicycle instead of using our cars.
In conclusion, every person can contribute by teaching their children to be conscious of man's impact on the environment and by sharing these ideas with other people. So, as you can see there are a lot of things that we, as individuals, can do to prevent climate change!
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