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Make up Some women like putting on make up. They want to show themselves beatiful. I put on make up everyday before going out and apply sunscreen on my face and body to protect my skin from sunshin which includes ultraviolet. As I don't want to be suntunned. It's a cause of spots and wrinkles. Some women want to have a fair skin. There are loads kind of whitening cream in the shop. Nowadays young men care about their appearance. Some people have allegies to cosmetics and their skin get ichy and swollen. It's hard to define beauty. It depends on our taste. I think smiling and expressive face are preferable.

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Make up

Some women like putting on make up because they want to show make themselves look beautiful.

I put on make up everyday before going out, and apply sunscreen on my face and body to protect my skin from sunshin which includes ultraviolet rays.
As I don't want to get sunburn since it causes It's a cause of spots and wrinkles.

Some women want to have a fair skin, and there are loads many kinds of whitening cream in the shops.

Nowadays, young men care about our appearance.

Some people have allergies to cosmetics, and which makes their skin itch and swell. get ichy and swollen.

It's hard to define beauty because it depends on their taste.
I think smiling and expressive faces are preferable.
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Make up

Some women like putting on make up.
They want to show themselves beautiful.

I put on make up everyday before going out and apply sunscreen on my face and body to protect my skin from sunshin which includes ultraviolet.
As I don't want to be suntunned.
because It's a cause of spots and wrinkles.

Some women want to have a fair skin.
There are loads kind of whitening cream in the shops.

Nowadays young men care about our their appearance.

Some people have allegies allergy to cosmetics and their skin gets ichy and swollen.

It's hard to define beauty. It depends on their taste.
I think smiling and expressive face are preferable.
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Nice point:)

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