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What is this? I went to McDonald's in this morning before work. I ordered a ice coffee. I take a milk after, I drank it. I'm very surprised!! It was a coke!! It is an accident. I was still sleepy, so I got up by this drink.

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What is this?

I went to McDonald's in the morning before work.

I ordered an ice coffee.
I got a milk after and drank it. I was very surprised!!
It was a coke!! It was an accident.
I was still sleepy, so this drink woke me up. {I think phrasing it this way sounds more natural}

Good job! Make sure to keep using the past tense in a story like this. Even if it seems obvious from the context that it took place in the past, you still have to use the past tense.

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What is this?

I went to McDonald's in this morning before work.

I ordered a ice coffee.
I take took a milk after, I drank it. I'm was very surprised!!
It was a coke!! It is was an accident.
I was am still sleepy, so I got up by this drink.

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