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many mistakes? The importance of the environment in the university. Introduction. The aim of this report is to show what improvements the university needs to conserve the environment. In addition, this text could be useful to suggest how the government could spend the amount of money that it has available. Current situation. Currently, the university has few green areas. Also there are few recycling points, which, some are very damaged. On the other hand, the cleaning service is not suitable. There are areas with a lot of dirt. Possible improvements. An important improvement would be to plant more trees and plants in the outdoor patio. This would create more green areas, which would be good for the environment. Another improvement would be to add more recycling points depending of each type of material, and fix the damaged points. And finally, to hire a new cleaning service. Making improvements. Students of the university will help with the improvements, such as planting new trees and plants, or helping to repair recycling points. Conclusion. With this improvements, we will be helping the enviroment, and at the same time the university aspect will improve. This will be very rewarding.

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The importance of the environment at the university.

Introduction.
The aim of this report is to show what improvements the university needs to make in order to conserve the environment. In addition, this report could be useful in proposing ways in which the government could better spend its budget.

Current situation.
Currently, the university has few green areas. Also, there is a lack of recycling points, wth some being badly damaged. On the other hand, the cleaning services are not efficient. There are too many dirty areas.

Possible improvements.
An important improvement, would be to plant more trees and plants in the outdoor patio. This would create more green areas, which would be good for the environment.

Another improvement would be to add more recycling points, each for a different type of material, and fix the damaged points.

And finally, to hire a new cleaning service.

Making improvements.
Students of the university will help with the improvements, such as planting new trees and plants, or helping to repair recycling points.

Conclusion.
With these improvements, we will be enhancing the enviroment, and at the same time, the university's image will be improved. This will be very rewarding.

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