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Could anyone help me to edit my essay? The Dragon Boat Festival was over and it was a sign of getting ready to attend school. Looking back on Three-day holiday, l was mixed with excitment and tiredness. My friends followed me to my hometown; all out of blue, l met my foreign teacher on the train by chance, and l was a bit nervous, because my oral English was not good. But after we had lunch, l.changed my mind. He was so kind. During we chatted with each other,l knew that Jewish people always paid the bill, and it was rarely for them to split the bill. Thus, l took advantage of it. By the way, my foreign teacher came from Canifornia, USA. During the short journey, l had a hard time because l could not make myself fully understood. Anyway, l made it, because l am in school now.

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When the Dragon Boat Festival was over, it was a sign to get ready for school again. Looking back on the three-day holiday, I felt a mixture of excitement and tiredness. [My friends followed me to my hometown]. Out of the blue, I ran into my foreign teacher on the train. I was a bit nervous because my oral English is not that good, but I was more confident/comfortable after we had lunch. He was so kind. I know that Jewish people usually pay the bill and it is rare for them to split the bill, so I took advantage of it. By the way, my foreign teacher is from California, USA. During the short journey, I had a hard time because I could not express myself clearly, but I made it, and I'm in school now.

*I tried to keep it as close to your version as I could, so as not to change the meaning too much.

[My friends followed me to my hometown] - Is this why you were excited? Were they on the train with you when you ran into your teacher? I am not sure where this sentence fits into the picture.

Good job. It sounds like you had fun and got free lunch :)


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