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Money - short essay Money is a very important thing for most people. The most people work hard and for this they get more and less salary that depends on who what kind of work does. If someone has a very good job with high salary then he/she is able to save money definitely. Hovewer, there are a lot of people who do not afford to put any money aside because they have low salary. Furthermore, there are a lot of people who do not like to saving and they usually spend their full salary and if it is happening something then they can find themselven in an unpleasant situation. In my opinion, children should be educated that money are earnd with hard work and it is possible then they save money. In Hungary, the half of the population try to put any money aside. This amount is not too much in most cases because the salaries are not too high. Furthermore, banks do not give too much interest therefore if someone has a lot of money then it is better to invest in an immovable. Most people usually try to save for a house, a car or a traveling.

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Money -  A short essay.

Money is a very important thing for most people, who work hard to earn a higher or lower salary depending on what kind of work they do.

If someone has a very good job with a high salary, then he/she is definitely able to save money. However, there are a lot of people who cannot afford to put any money aside, because they have a low salary. Furthermore, there are a lot of people who do not like to save and they usually spend their full salary every month. If something happens, they often find themselves in an unpleasant situation. In my opinion, children should be taught that money is earned through hard work and it is possible to save money.

In Hungary, half of the population try to put some money aside. This amount is modest in most cases, because the salaries are not too high. Furthermore, banks do not offer too much interest and therefore if someone has a lot of money, then it is better to invest in an immovable asset.

Most people usually try to save for a house, a car or for traveling.

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Money is a very important thing for most people. The Most people work hard and for this they get more and or less salary that depends depending on who they are and what kind of work does they do.
If someone has a very good job with a high salary then he/she is they are able to save money definitely. Hovewer, there are a lot of people who do cannot afford to put any money aside because they have a low salary. Furthermore, there are a lot of people who do not like to saving and they usually spend their full salary, and if it is happening something that happens then they can find themselven in an unpleasant situation. In my opinion, children should be educated taught that money are is earned with hard work, and it is possible then that they will save money.
In Hungary, the half of the population try to put any some money aside. This amount is not too much in most cases because the salaries are not too very high. Furthermore, banks do not give too pay much interest, therefore if someone has a lot of money then it is better to invest in an immovable.
Most people usually try to save for a house, a car or a for traveling.

really good, Attila!  :-) 

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