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Our firm is in trouble.
hi
this is all understandable
I've edited it below
good luck with the job
Our firm is in trouble.
The firm I work in is in trouble
recently, our business is very bad, and can't even afford to pay salaries now.
Recently my boss is always losing his temper,
but he was a good tempered person before.
A lot of colleagues have already left, but I
think I shouldn't.
The firm was created by my boss three years ago.
I was the first member of staff after my boss.
After I graduated, I had joined this firm, till
now is three years. ...( structure of this sentence is awkward - you could say ‘I joined this firm after I graduated
three years ago’)
I have learned a lot from my boss and have grown
a lot in these three years, so I can't leave, I'll stick it out through these
hard times.
If I had known this three years ago, I would
still have joined the company, because my boss deserves my decision.-(‘
deserves my decision’ is awkward, you perhaps could say ‘deserves my loyalty’? It doesn’t quite mean
the same thing though. I think you were trying to say something like ‘getting
to know and work with my boss has confirmed that I made the right decision’
If I were to leave as soon as the firm got in trouble, I would be a bad person.
I believe everything will be ok.
(your boss is lucky to have you!
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