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What's your favorite place to visit on weekend? I started to practice my writing skill so I chose a random question to develop and here is my first writing text. I hope you can help me correcting it, thanks in advance ----------------------- My favorite place to go on weekends is generally to the cinema and then go to a restaurant for dinner with my girlfriend. I choose go to the cinema because I am a movie fan and I enjoy the development of the arguments who has almost every film, also I think is a good way to spend time with good company even if in fact you aren't actually talking with the other, that's why a good way to end the date is go to a restaurant for dinner because first the movie will give you a few topics to share and second you will need that extra time to talk with your date. In other words this plan has all the things I need to have in a good weekend: movies, food, and my girlfriend, and what about you? What's your favorite place to visit on weekend?

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What's your favorite place to visit on weekend?

I started to practice my writing skill so I chose a random question to develop and here is my first writing text. I hope you can help me correcting it, thanks in advance
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My favorite place to go on the weekends is generally to the cinema and then go to a restaurant for dinner with my girlfriend.

I choose to go to the cinema because I am a movie fan and I enjoy the development of the arguments who has in almost every film. Also I think it is a good way to spend time with good company. Even if in fact you aren't actually talking with the other. That's why a good way to end the date is go to a restaurant for dinner. because First, the movie will give you a few topics to share and second, you will need that extra time to talk with your date.

In other words, this plan has all the things I need to have in a good weekend: movies, food, and my girlfriend. What about you? What's your favorite place to visit on weekend?

Great text! Mostly I just added periods to break up the sentences. When you just use too many commas the sentences run on too long and it becomes hard to follow. Your grammar is excellent!

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