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Hello and welcome to you! Hey there! Thanks so much for visiting my website. My name is Marine, I'm a French living actually in Kobe, Japan. I'm very proud to present you my website "OOOO", which is a project that's near and dear to my heart, born from the passion I have for Japan and for postcard. In 2013, I suscribe to a website called Postcrossing, thanks to whom anybody can receive postcards from all over the world, (almost) for free. That's when I started to send and receive postcard from random people from the USA, Germany or India that I had my first uncounter with the Japanese Gotochi Cards. When you think about "postcard", I bet you imagine rectangular, banal with pretty simple design postcard, right? But Japanese Gotochi Cards are colorful, terribly cute, easy to understand what they depict, quite big and have an original design. Because there's an explication of what the postcard depict, they're inscructive too! I couldn't resist to their charm and started to collect them! At this time, Gotochi Cards weren't sold on the internet, but could only be bought in Japan or received threw exchanges. And because they're region-limited, they're very much appreciated and popular amoung postcard collectors and Japan culture amateurs. As my collection grew, I was animated by two desires : * make people know about the Gotochi Card, not even foreign people but also make Japanese people know about it * make people know about all the great and traditional aspects of Japan, about the delicious and regional food, about Japanese History and litterature, about the beautiful, the modern or the hidden places of Japan. It's with this enthousiasm that I'm starting my website and want to share my passion with you, and hope to send a piece of travel, a piece of Japan to you.

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Hello and welcome to you!

Hey there!

Thanks so much for visiting my website.
My name is Marine, I'm a French, currently living actually in Kobe, Japan.
I'm very proud to present you my website "OOOO", which is a project that's near and dear to my heart, born from the passion I have for Japan and for postcards.

In 2013, I subscribed to a website called Postcrossing, thanks to whom which anybody can receive postcards from all over the world, (almost) for free. That's when I started to send and receive postcards from random people from the USA, Germany or India, Then that I had my first encounter with the Japanese Gotochi Cards.

When you think about "postcards", I bet you imagine rectangular, banal with pretty simple design postcards, right? But Japanese Gotochi Cards are colorful, terribly cute, it's easy to understand what they depict. They are quite big and have an original design. Because there's an explanation of what the postcards depict, they're instructive too! I couldn't resist to their charm and started to collect them!

At this time, Gotochi Cards weren't sold on the internet, but could only be bought in Japan or received through exchanges. And because they're region-limited, they're very much appreciated and popular amoung postcard collectors and Japan culture lovers amateurs.

As my collection grew, I was animated motivated by two desires :
* Introducing to people know about the Gotochi Card, not even only foreign people but also make Japanese people know about it
* Introducing to people know about all the great and traditional aspects of Japan, about the delicious and regional food, about Japanese History and literature, about the beautiful, the modern or and the hidden places of Japan.

It's with this enthusiasm that I'm starting my website and want to share my passion with you, and hope to send a piece of travel, a piece of Japan to you.
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I'm a French        I"m French   ("French" is not a noun! It can be an adjective or a language, but never a noun). 

living actually in Kobe     Currently living in Kobe    (I think you did a literal translation here. The French word "actuellement" and the English word "actually" are false friends, and they do not have the same meaning. In English, "currently" means "at the present time" but "actually" means "in reality / in fact / truthfully". ).

I'm very proud to present you my website  I'm very proud to present to you my website / I'm very proud to present my website to you

the passion I have for Japan and for postcards

In 2013, I suscribe subscribed to a website

called Postcrossing, thanks to whom which  (a website is not a person. "Whom" is for referring to human beings).

That's when I started to send and receive postcards

I had my first uncounter encounter

 an explication explanation of what the postcards depict,

they're inscructive instructive too!

I couldn't resist to their charm 

received threw through exchanges.

amoung among postcard collectors

litterature     literature 

enthousiasm     enthusiasm

 make let  people know about the Gotochi card  

not  even  just foreign people                        

but also  make  let  Japanese people know



In English, we would say "to let   somebody know" which is a colloquial way of saying "to inform somebody about something / to spread the news about something".

We would not normally say "to make somebody know" because that sounds rather violent and forceful, as though you are going to oblige somebody to learn something against their will.




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