I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English? I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application? I’d like to speak about the reason I entry your company. I

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I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English? I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application? I’d like to speak about the reason I entry your company. I’m very interested in your products. Your lump seems stronger light and cencer than other company. I thought there is a possibility to make various idea lump. I would like to sell your lump and make any new lump over the world. I thought that this is exactly what I want to do in my entire life. In the meantime, I have been study abroad to Finland for 10 month, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility more globally. I am able to adjust to new circumstance quick and study harder to through expericing study abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.

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I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English?

I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application?

I’d like to speak about ~~the~~ my reason ~~I entry~~ for joining your company. I’m very interested in your products. Your ~~lump~~ lamp seems to be stronger, lighter, and cencer ?? than other companies. I thought there is a possibility to make various ideas for lamps. I would like to sell your lamps and make any new lamp ~~over~~ around the world. I ~~thought~~ think that this is exactly what I want to do in my entire life. In the meantime, I have ~~been study~~ studied abroad to in Finland for 10 months, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility ~~more~~ globally. I am able to adjust to new circumstances quick and I study harder ~~to through~~ ~~expericing~~ in my experience in studying ~~study~~ abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.

I'm sorry but I really do not understand any of this... Your lump seems stronger light and cencer than other company. I thought there is a possibility to make various idea lump. I would like to sell your lump and make any new lump over the world. Maybe you mean "lamp" and "sensor" but it does not make sense.

I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English?

I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application?

I’d like to speak about why I want to join your company. I’m very interested in your products. (Your (lump?) seems stronger light and (cencer?) than other companies'.?) I thought there is a possibility to make various idea lump. I would like to sell your lump and make any new lump over the world. This is exactly what I want to do in life. In the meantime, I have been studying abroad in Finland for 10 months, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility in general. I am able to adjust to new circumstances quickly, study harder and gain experience by study abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.

Very well written but a little obscure in places.

I have a job interview this week. Could you check my English?

I have a job interview this week! Could you check my reasons for application?

I’d like to speak about the reason (why) I (gain) entry into (or maybe you mean choose) your company. I’m very interested in your products. Your lump (lamps!!!) seems stronger lighter and cencer(?) than other company. I thought (think) there is a possibility to make various idea lump (lamps). I would like to sell your lump (lamps) and make any different new lump (lamps) over the world. I (think) thought that this is exactly what I want to do in my entire life. In the meantime, I have been study (studied) abroad to Finland for 10 month, and I am ready to broaden my role of responsibility more globally. I am able to adjust to new circumstance(s) quickly and study harder to through expericing(?) study abroad. I believe I will be able to learn how to do my job quickly and play a good role in your company.

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