First day. My name is Iren and I'm 20 y.o. I live in Russia and I try to learn English. I think that idea with diary will help me whis it. And today I would like to tell you about one kind of my sport

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First day. My name is Iren and I'm 20 y.o. I live in Russia and I try to learn English. I think that idea with diary will help me whis it. And today I would like to tell you about one kind of my sports. Because I prefer different kinds of it. So, one of it is pole dance. And a lot of people associate it whis night bars and so on, but they wrong. There are absolutely another goal. I mean, that is a hard work! I have been training this for only 3 months and when I wathed different videos in YouTube, I thought that it is so easy. And, of course, I wrong. Now I am understanding it! So, pole dance have two directions. One of it is pole sport and another is pole exotic. I am training in the tirst direction. And I like it so much! Many people says that the clothes for this sport is very open. Yes, I agree with it, but if you try to doing all tricks in clothed clothing, you can't do that. Because the pilon will slip out. So, I hope you enjoyed this story! (The picture is taken from the Internet)

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First Day

My name is Iren and I'm 20. I live in Russia and I'm studying English. I think the idea of the diary will help me with this task. Today I would like to tell you about one of my favorite sports, because in fact, I like different kinds of sports, not only one. So, one of them is pole dance. A lot of people associate it with night clubs, strip bars and so on, but they are wrong. This sport has an absolutely different purpose. I mean, it is hard work! I have been doing this for only 3 months and when I watched different videos of it on YouTube, I thought that it was so easy. Of course, I was wrong. Now I understand it! So, pole dance have two directions, one is pole sport and the other is pole exotic. I am training in the tirst direction, and I like it so much! Many people say that the clothes for this sport are very tight. Yes, I agree with it, but if you try to do all the moves in loose clothing, you simply can't, because the pilon slips out. So, I hope you enjoyed this story! :)
(The picture was taken from the Internet)

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