Think of a time when someone rude to you
When sometimes people was rude to you just like road rage. They may say something offence to you or provoke gesture to you. But you don’t need to mind. People like garbage trucks. They run around with garbage in the full disappointment, full of frustration, full of anger and when the piles up. They need a place to dump it on. Sometimes they’ll dump it on you. But you don’t take a person, you just wave, smile, you wish and you move on. Don’t let their garbage spread to the people at work, at home, on the streets. You love those who treat you and pray for those who don’t.
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Think of a time when someone was rude to you
Sometimes people become angry at you just like road rage. They may say something offensive to you or make a provocative gesture at you. But you don’t need to mind. People are like garbage trucks. They run around with garbage, disappointed, full of frustration, full of anger and when it piles up they need a place to dump it on. Sometimes they’ll dump it on you. But you don’t take it personally, just wave, smile, wish them well and move on. Don’t let their garbage spread to the people at work, at home, on the streets. You love those who mistreat you and pray for those who don’t.Very well written!
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你可以說"something offensive" 而不是 "something offence" 。
"But you don’t need to mind" 是一個很中文的表達，你可以用 "Please forgive their rude."
"They run around with garbage in the full disappointment, full of frustration, full of anger and when the piles up."你是想表達：“他們經常和壞傢伙一起相處，並且當他們和自己的狐朋狗友一起聊天的時候，老是帶著負面的情緒，經常情緒化，對身邊的事情感到失望，和經常進行自我挫敗，和總是感到憤怒” 嗎？ run around是跑來跑去的意思，你可以用He get on with his classmates. My bother often hang out with the smart guys.之類的表達“相處，一起交往”。還有，最重要的是英語的邏輯，在英文中，母語是英語的人喜歡一開始就把最重要的事講出來，然後在後面句子（段落）中補充細節。
例如你可以說："Some people have bad temper and see things in a emotional way,often feel disappointed to the world ,suddenly being angry for no reason."
很重要的一點是你的表達要準確，例如對什麼事情感到失望，憤怒。在你的作文中，說有的人感到失望和感到沮丧，但沒有說什麼事和原因導致會有這種感覺。讀的人會感覺很零散和沒有說服力，很難理解。另外 full of anger，full of frustration，“充滿憤怒，沮丧”，這是中文的表達，英文你可以說"I feel angry" or “ I feel strongly annoying”.
"when the piles up" 我認為你是想說：“當情緒爆發的時候”，當要表達這個意思的時候，我會說:"when their emotion run high" 或者"when they lost their temper."
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