Search from various English teachers...
Russia flagPavel
The Village. "The derby begins. Part 2". Please, correct my mistakes. Part 2. ...Well, the game was going on, Bill Meadow and Rod were swearing at each other. Meanwhile the score was 5:1 in our favour. Johnson couldn't stop, he ran there and back. Afterr the seventieth minute the waterfall began flowing. Denny, Pavel, Matt... Full time was 8-1. "Well done, guys! I proud of you!" Captain said. "Blind idiot! Look who we defeated! A crowd of fagots." Bill Meadow replied. They went on swearing at each other. Some of the rivals tried to cry something about the following game. Certaintly, we didn't give a f..k about that. Only Bill Bright who didn't take part in the game, cried back: "Where is your f..king United?" "Easy walk. I scheduled a training at tomorrow's evening. Semi-final waits for us". Rod said.

Corrections · 3

1

The Village. "The derby begins. Part 2". Please, correct my mistakes.

Part 2.

...Well, the game was going on; Bill Meadow and Rod were swearing at each other. Meanwhile, the score was 5:1 in our favour. Johnson couldn't stop: he was running there and back. After the seventieth minute the waterfall began flowing. Denny, Pavel, Matt... Full time was 8-1. 

"Well done, guys! I'm proud of you!" the captain said.
"Blind idiot! Look who we defeated! A crowd of fagots." (This word has 2 "g"s but I would recommend censoring this along with "f...k") Bill Meadow replied. They went on swearing at each other.
Some of the rivals tried to cry something about the following game. Certainly, we didn't give a f..k about that. Only Bill Bright, who hadn't taken part in the game, cried back:
"Where is your f..king United?"
"Easy walk. I scheduled a training at tomorrow evening. The semi-final is waiting for us," Rod said.

0
...

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today