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Thank you letter Dear Mrs. Peake, I am writing to thank your for the fantastic opportunity to take part in the Week Experience Course which took part in your office last month. It was a truly amazing experience and it helped me a great deal in understanding the difference between classroom studies and actually in a busy atmosphere of a real office. One of the best things about my experience, I must admit, were the people. Even in such a short period they really made me feel a part of the team and I am extremely grateful for that. Everyone was so supportive and understanding even when I made mistakes. But, after all, mistakes are an essential part of the learning process – this is the way you learn. I was so pleased to be given a chance to get first-hand experience with computers. Management being my major field of study, I have never been much into technical side of things. Working in your office have me opportunity to see things from a different perspective. Another point I would like to mention is the opportunity to talk to real public which was extremely valuable and awe-inspiring experience. Social contacts outside my immediate circle of friends and relatives have always been difficult to me. Practice which I got in your office will be of great benefit in dealing with it. I realise how important are social skills in my profession and this experience will be the first step in that direction. Finally, I feel that my experience is bound to stand me in good stead for my project work next semester. Not only have I received some valuable knowledge but also I am able now to look at the matters not from a point of view of a lone, inexperienced student but as a member of a real team of professionals. Besides, I have no doubt that my prospects for the future have been greatly improved by the time spent with you. I feel so much more confident and ready-to-action now. Thank you again for your time and kindness. Yours sincerely, Bogdan Schmidt

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Thank you letter

Dear Mrs. Peake,

I am writing to thank your for the fantastic opportunity to take part in the Week Experience Course which took part place in your office last month. It was a truly amazing experience and it helped me a great deal in understanding the difference between classroom studies and actually being in a busy atmosphere of a real office.
One of the best things about my experience, I must admit, were the people. Even in such a short period they really made me feel a part of the team and I am extremely grateful for that. Everyone was so supportive and understanding even when I made mistakes. But, after all, mistakes are an essential part of the learning process – this is the way you learn.
I was so pleased to be given a chance to get first-hand experience with computers. With management being my major field of study, I have never been much into the technical side of things all that much. Working in your office (have) gave me an opportunity to see things from a different perspective.
Another point I would like to mention is was the opportunity to talk to the real public, which was an extremely valuable and awe-inspiring experience. Social contacts outside my immediate circle of friends and relatives have always been difficult to for me.  The practice which I got in your office will be of great benefit in dealing with it. I realise how important are social skills are in my profession and this experience will be the first step for helping me in that direction.
Finally, I feel that my experience is bound to stand place me in good stead standing for my project work next semester. Not only have I received some valuable knowledge, but also I am able now able to look at the matters not from a point of view of a lone, inexperienced student, but as a member of a real team of professionals. Besides, I have no doubt that my prospects for the future have been greatly improved by the time spent with you. I feel so much more confident and ready-to-action now.
Thank you again for your time and kindness.

Yours sincerely,
Bogdan Schmidt

You have a pleasant writing style Bogdan.  I have offered some my ideas around writing structure which, of course is subjective at the best of times.  The dreaded split infinitives are changing in English grammar and style.  For example, "it has rarely been done" because "it has been" is the infinitive.  Thus, "it has been done rarely" does not split "has been."  I think that some of it is just personal style.  Overall, I enjoyed your written text. Good luck with your learning endeavours.




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My pleasure Olga. "Keep your nose to the grindstone" (keep up the hard work). If I can help you again, please ask. Have a good day.

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