This follows My eating habits I said "basically without using those foods I don't like". She used more than I use, bought a lot of snacks because she loved them, and also didn't bake bread. I used to

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This follows My eating habits I said "basically without using those foods I don't like". She used more than I use, bought a lot of snacks because she loved them, and also didn't bake bread. I used to buy and eat snacks until the middle of 20's, but lost my interest after I noticed they are not good for our health. I cook to have healthier foods but actually I don't want to cook if someone cooks for me. I like to cook but I wish I could cook only when I feel like to cook. I have to cook because I don't want to eat out even when I don't feel like cooking. Sometimes I go bars or restaurants when I think it's worth of it or when my friends or families ask me to, but never go to fast food restaurants such as McDonald.

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This follows My eating habits

I said "basically without using those foods I don't like".
She used more than I use, bought a lot of snacks because she loved them, and also didn't bake bread.

I used to buy and eat snacks until the middle of 20's, but lost my interest after I noticed they are not good for our health.

I cook in order to have healthier foods, but actually I don't want to would rather not cook if someone cooks for me.*
I like to cook but I wish I could cook only when I feel like to cook felt like it.
But I have to cook, whether I want to or not, because if I don't want to eat out even when I don't feel like cooking. **
Sometimes I go bars or restaurants when I think it's worth of it*** or when my friends or families ask me to, but never go to fast food restaurants such as McDonalds.

よちさん、素晴らしいですよ。Very natural writing, with no significant mistakes.

* The phrase "in order to 何々" is very useful. It has the meaning 「何々のために」 - "for the purpose of X." Just writing "to" is also fine, but "to" has so many meanings, it sometimes helps to say "in order to" in order to be more clear.

** Your original sentence was a little awkward, so I changed it around a little.

*** "when I think it's worth it" - the meaning is not clear.

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