A Letter For Oreo #1
Oreo, do you remember when my family and I addopt you and Cookie at 19th Febuary? We're so happy have a chance to addopt you. Before I addopt you and Cookie, I was addopt 2 rabbits like you. Champion and Bunny. But they died because of me. It was my fault. I feel guilty. I can't apologize my self.
After 1 or 2 months, I went to pet store. And there I met you and Cookie. As I said before, my family and I feel so happy after addopt you. One day, my dad found something different with Cookie. Her legs so wet, and there must be a problem. And ya, Cookie got diarhea. I do my best to take care of Cookie. But, Cookie died after 7 days struggle with diarhea. I was so sad. After the incident, I promise I'll take care of you more than before.
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A Letter For Oreo #1
Oreo, do you remember when my family and I adopted you and Cookie on the 19th Febuary? We were so happy to have a chance to adopt you. Before I adopted you and Cookie, I adopted 2 rabbits like you. Champion and Bunny. But they died because of me. It was my fault. I feel guilty. I can't apologize my self.After 1 or 2 months, I went to a pet store. And there I met you and Cookie. As I said before, my family and I feel so happy after having adopted you. One day, my dad found something different with Cookie. Her legs were so wet, and there must have been a problem. And ya, Cookie had diarhea. I dis my best to take care of Cookie. But, Cookie died after 7 days struggle with diarhea. I was so sad. After the incident, I promise I'll take care of you more than before.
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