What happened today
Well todya i woke up early in the morning at 5 am.
But at that time i was feeling so sleepy so i again gonna sleep,but it's only a 15 minutes nap.Then i retired a bad and went for a loo. After that i got ready because i had to go to play cricket.But today our team lost all the matches and it's really very shameful for us.Then i returned to home and had a breakfast.After that i went to have a bath.having bath i slept because i was so tired.And then i watched tv and study and that's all.thankyou
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What happened today
Well, today I woke up early in the morning at 5am, but at that time I was feeling so sleepy so i again gonna I went back to sleep, but it's was only a 15 minutes nap. Then I retired [? felt bad?] a bad and went for a to the loo. After that I got ready because I had to go to play cricket. But Today our team lost all the matches and it's was really very shameful for us. Then I returned to home and had a breakfast. Afterwards that I went to have a bath and then having bath I slept because I was so tired. Later, And then I watched TV and studied, and that's all. Thank you.
Please correct my mistakes as soon as is possible.
The sentence in italics is confused by the word 'retired', do you mean you felt bad after the nap? If so, "Then I felt bad and went to the loo". Note that 'loo' is colloquial British English, so depending on who you are speaking/writing to, you might want to use 'toilet' or 'bathroom'. Or do you mean you felt less tired? More awake? If so, "The I felt more awake and so went to the loo".
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