Milk 牛奶
I am 19 years old now,I will drink a glass of milk every night.At first it was because I was short when I was a child,and my mother was anxious to make me grow taller(who had required me to drink heated fresh blood of male chicken),then I drank milk from junior high school.Now I am 180 centimeters tall(mom,thank you),there is not much hope grows taller,but drink milk seems to become a habit.By the way,I like drink with chocolate pie.
我今年19岁,每晚都会喝一杯牛奶。起初是因为我小时候比较矮,我妈急着让我长高(让我喝过雄鸡血),就从初中开始喝牛奶了。现在我1米8(老妈,多谢啦),不太可能再长高了,但是喝牛奶好像已经成了一种习惯。对了,我喜欢配着巧克力派吃。
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Milk 牛奶
I am 19 years old now,I will drink a glass of milk every night.At first it was because I was short when I was a child,and my mother was anxious to make me grow taller(who had required me to drink heated fresh blood of male chicken),then I drank milk from junior high school.Now I am 180 centimeters tall(mom,thank you),there is not much hope grows for growing taller,but drinking milk seems to become a habit.By the way,I like drink with chocolate pie.我今年19岁,每晚都会喝一杯牛奶。起初是因为我小时候比较矮,我妈急着让我长高(让我喝过雄鸡血),就从初中开始喝牛奶了。现在我1米8(老妈,多谢啦),不太可能再长高了,但是喝牛奶好像已经成了一种习惯。对了,我喜欢配着巧克力派吃。
This is very good, the only errors were in using the continuos forms of verbs towards the end.
When speaking about a continuos action that is done over a long period of time such as 'drinking milk', we use the continuous form of the verb, in this case 'drink' becomes 'drinking'.
other examples could be 'I enjoy swimming', changing the verb 'swim' to 'swimming'.
or 'climbing is fun', changing the verb 'climb' to 'climbing'.
Other than that though, very good.
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