Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!
Could you, please, correct the following sentences? Thank you!
The baby is riding a tricycle (or the tricycle? If I see the baby and his tricycle)
The boy is rollerblading.
These/the people are having a picnic. This man has already eaten and now he is having a rest.
The man is having a walk with his dog.
The baby has just started walking/to walk.
This babies are playing with water/sand (I think there is no need to put the before water or sand, right?)
There are two sailing boats on the lake (or in the lake?) One of them is floating. Another one turned over. The boy is trying to get it out with a stick.
These children caught tadpoles and put them into the jar with water.
The boy is scared, because he can't stop and feels like going to fall (the boy is rollerblading)
Thank you for your attention!
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Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!Could Would you, please, correct the following sentences? Thank you! (Asking could you is like saying "Are you capable of...."
The baby is riding a tricycle.
The boy is rollerblading.
These/the/those people are having a picnic. This man has already eaten and now he is having a rest.
The man is having a walk with his dog.
The baby has just started walking/to walk.
This These/those/the babies are playing with water/sand.
There are two sailing boats on the lake. One of them is floating. Another The other one turned over has capsized. The boy is trying to get it out with a stick.
These children caught tadpoles and put them into the a jar with water.
The boy is scared, because he can't stop and feels like he is going to fall.
Thank you for your attention! assistance/help.
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Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!Could you, please, correct the following sentences? Thank you!
The baby is riding a tricycle (or the tricycle? If I see the baby and his tricycle). "A tricycle" or "his tricycle" are correct.
The boy is rollerblading. Correct.
These/the people are having a picnic. This man has already eaten and now he is having a rest. That's correct.
The man is having going for a walk with his dog. This is if your focus is on what the man is doing. If you're talking about the dog you would say "the man is taking his dog for a walk".
The baby has just started walking/to walk. Both are correct. . "Walking" would be most natural if you are saying the baby has recently taken his first steps when he was only crawling before.
These babies are playing with water/sand (I think there is no need to put the before water or sand, right?). That's correct.
There are two sailing boats on the lake (or in the lake?) "In the lake" suggests that they have sunk and are under the water". One of them is floating. Another one has turned over. The boy is trying to get it out with a stick.
These children caught some tadpoles and put them into the jar with water.
The boy is scared, because he can't stop and feels like he's going to fall (the boy is rollerblading)
Thank you for your attention!
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