About myself.
Let me introduce myself. My name is Mike. But my friends often
name me 'Iron Mike' .I have been leaving in the city of Olenegorsk. I
am from Russia. I have been leaving here very a long time. My sity is
not very beautiful. But anyway I like my city because it is my native
city.
I spend much time on the internet. I really like computers.
Sometimes, I go to bed very later because I write some computer of
programs. I like do it. But I am not a pro programmer any more. I
think I will become pro and I will make money a lot.
I have a dog. Its name is Kessi. She really good. She is 5 years old.
She likes to play, to eat and to sleep. Breed my doggy is Stafford. She
is red color. Kessi is very kind.
I have two rooms. I live one but as you could note with the dog. My
flat is not big but very cool. I have a big TV. But I don't watch it
often. But in fact my TV is on almost contantly. Also I have two
computers and I always working at their.
This is the end!
''One smile can start a frandship''
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About myself.
Let me introduce myself. My name is Mike. But my friends oftencall me 'Iron Mike'. I have been living in the city of Olenegorsk. I
am from Russia. I have been living here for a very long time. My city is
not very beautiful. But I like my city anyway, because it is my native
city.
I spend a lot of time on the internet. I really like computers.
Sometimes, I go to bed very late because I have been writing some computer
programs. I like to do it. But I am not a professional programmer any more. I
think I will become professional and I will make a lot of money.
I also have a dog. Its name is Kessi. She is really good. She is five years old.
She likes to play, to e,at and to sleep. The breed of my dog is Stafford. Her fur is red in color. Kessi is very kind.
My flat has two rooms. I live in one, together with my dog (is this what you wanted to say?). My
flat is not big, but it is very cool. I have a big TV. But I don't watch it
often. But in fact my TV is on almost constantly. Also, I have two
computers and I am always working on them.
This is the end!
''One smile can start a friendship''.
Note: Your spacing seems inconsistent, sentences should run together to the end of the page, with a single space after the end of each sentences, as well as line spacing between paragraphs. Well written!
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