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Please help me to check them. Paraphrasing is my important problems =( 1. Sloppy people carry in their mind’s eye a heavenly vision, a precise plan that is so stupendous, so perfect, it can’t be achieved in this world or the next. --> Sloppy people imagine a fantastic vision; an accurate, fabulous and perfect plan that can’t be reached in this world or the next 2. Sloppy people can’t bear to part with anything. They give loving attention to every detail. When sloppy people say they’re going to tackle the surface of a desk, they really mean it. --> Sloppy people can’t stand separating with anything and love paying attention to every detail. When sloppy people say they’re going to consider the surface of a desk, they really mean it. 3. Neat people are bums and clods at heart. They have cavalier attitudes toward possession, including family heirlooms. Everything is just another dust catcher to them. If anything collects dust, it’s got to go and that’s that. Neat people will toy with the idea of throwing the children out of the house just to cut down on the clutter. --> Neat people are very homely, simple and have abandon views about property, including family heritage. To them, everything is just another dirt catcher and if anything gets dirt, it will go and that is so natural. Neat people will also have a funny idea of letting the children out of the house just to clean the mess.

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Please help me to check them. Paraphrasing is my important problems =(

1. Sloppy people carry in their mind’s eye a heavenly vision, a precise plan that is so stupendous, so perfect, it can’t be achieved in this world or the next.
--> Sloppy people imagine a fantastic visions; an accurate, fabulous, and perfect plan that can’t be reached in this world or the next
2. Sloppy people can’t bear to part with anything. They give loving attention to every detail. When sloppy people say they’re going to tackle the surface of a desk, they really mean it.
--> Sloppy people can’t stand separating with anything leaving anything behind and love paying attention to every detail. When sloppy people say they’re going to work on something, they really mean it.
3. Neat people are bums and clods at heart. They have cavalier attitudes toward possession, including family heirlooms. Everything is just another dust catcher to them. If anything collects dust, it’s got to go and that’s that. Neat people will toy with the idea of throwing the children out of the house just to cut down on the clutter.
--> Neat people are very neat homely and simple, and have abandon views about necessity property, including family heritage. To them, everything is just another dirt catcher. and if it gets dusty, it goes. they will play with the idea of letting the children out of the house just to clean the mess.


hope that helps, not all were mistakes but better ways to say things (in my opinion.). Let me know if you have any questions.

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